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Ron Jeremy Pony


What to say about me... I'm a novelist, I enjoy writing Fanfiction (seriously I like it. Although I mainly do Justice League or Highschool of the Dead), and thanks to Dr. Whooves I found FIM.

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Set in the Room for Rent universe. Dash crashes into a river and makes a new friend. The two of them enjoy a week of drinking, partying, and just hanging out. As the week rolls on she discovers something about her friend that alters her perception a little. Proof that sometimes finding a kindred spirit, and finding a new friend, can lead to great memories, and help you discover a sort of courage you never knew existed.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

This won't happened to be based on the same song by Toby Keith~?

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I won't lie, that song along with Draxx99's story Room for Rent had a lot of inspiration that helped fuel it's completion.

k, the word you are looking for in the synopsis is kindred, Kindled implies fire... or starting something. I don't think you are talking about a burning spirit in this context. I'm gonna link this in my story, and I think I will be adding some nods to it. :pinkiehappy:

Still think you should flesh it out a bit more, as it seems to abruptly end. More detail on their exploits, and mebbe the growing relationship. Even if you go back and do it as flashbacks and memories, perhaps as Dash is coping with what happened.:rainbowderp:

Either way, despite being on the opposite side of the emotional spectrum from my little sitcom, I think you did well weaving it into my little universe. Right in the feels man...:fluttercry:

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That's not a bad idea, and I wouldn't mind to do another chapter completely from Dash's perspective. that way we could see how their friendship/romance grew during the time they were together. Hell, it would make an interesting chapter to say the least.

Why not. I'll write it out in a little while.

Way to end on a classy note dash

This story doesn't deserve as many downvotes as it has. It's sad, but sweet and touching.

I like this added chapter. It has, hope.

It's something we all need to help drive us.

Please continue.

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