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"Closing time.
One last call for alcohol so finish your whiskey or beer.
Closing time.
You don't have to go home but you can't stay here."
What do you do with a drunken Twilight? When the party ends, who will take you home? I know who I want to take me home...

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What is this, I don't even...:derpytongue2:

Seriously I dunno wtf this came from. Sometimes when my mind has nothing to do, I literally dream while awake. It's kinda how I wrote my first story, except that time I was TRYING to sleep.

This time I was roaming around work on autopilot, fixing the mess left by the day's customers, when the song "Closing Time" started playing. Next thin I know I'm daydreaming about having to take a drunken Twilight Sparkle home. After I snapped out of it a while later, I realized I really wanted to write the scene down, and here it is!

Don't hate me...:pinkiesad2:

And yea, I cooked up a back story for this scene if anyone cares. Basically the guy is part of a cultural exchange program between Equestria and Earth. He was given a magical disguise in the form of a necklace, and handed over to Twilight so he could observe and learn about pony culture. We meet him at the end of a very long day hanging around Twilight and her friends, and after a very intense Pinkie Welcome Party.

I'm considering writing the next scene, when Twilight wakes up the next morning and realizes how she was acting. but most likely, it will just gather dust like many of my other projects, lol. Now if you excuse me, I need to get back to writing Patchwork Ch3

"I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
...take me home.":twilightblush:

Oh, and here's the song


Great song man.

Interesting, this could get pretty funny. Favorited to see where the hell this goes lol

Interesting concept.
And drunken friends are always funny.

I like where this story is going, are you planing on posting more?

Kinda sorta, havnt decided yet. Got the idea already, just not sure when Imma get to it yet. It's gonna be from Twilight's PoV waking up the next morning. gah, i just realized I havnt even thought of a name for the guy,lol.

Holy crap, i has Fanart?:pinkiehappy: Thanks Klopki for the art, this is awesome, and kinda ironic. I never can find an artist for my full stories, and then my throw away chapter gets art, lol.:derpyderp1:

Here my reaction after reading the story
Can't wait for sequel!

:rainbowhuh: Wait I'm confused beyond repair. Still amazing fic here, so I shall wait for more.

Hmmm... drunkenness, isn't it a wonderful thing?:unsuresweetie: And now for the ultimate ultimatum, "Which is better?, Being drunk or high?:rainbowderp:
I'll be waiting for updates.

There's a difference? Remember, Alcohol is just another drug...:rainbowwild:

It just happens to be my drug of choice!:derpytongue2:

Not bad, I enjoyed this and it may not sound much, but I don´t comment a lot ( I download the txt and put it in my MP3). This is caught my eye and mind very nicely. Take as much time you need to make a the next chapter, but make sure it will make me grin ear to ear. :pinkiesmile:

Okay, why do I feel like this was a one date thing or yet that I was raped? 5 weeks passed since I read this and it´s still killing me to know what will happen. DO DAM IT BRONY :flutterrage: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

In a word? Minecraft. *twitch*
Celestia help me....:pinkiegasp:

Needless to say, my addiction has slowed my writing by about 90%.

The title reminds me of the movie Brain-Dead. :pinkiecrazy:

Is this dead?

6782561 Aww crap, my mistake. This was never meant to be marked as incomplete, as it was a one shot. I had some people talk me into making plans for a sequel, but it never got beyond the planning stage, and was put on a permanent back burner status. I wrote half a chapter and stopped.

I wholeheartedly apologize.:facehoof:

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