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Ron Jeremy Pony


What to say about me... I'm a novelist, I enjoy writing Fanfiction (seriously I like it. Although I mainly do Justice League or Highschool of the Dead), and thanks to Dr. Whooves I found FIM.

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More please good story

The cat is pleased.
Do continue.:pinkiehappy:

Loving it so far, but I must ask: will you introduce Discord in to the story?

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Will I introduce Discord into the story? Absolutely I will be introducing Discord into it. I think that if anyone would enjoy having an entire species that has never been around magic before in Equestria it would be Discord, and I'm sure everyone knows why he would be enjoying it.


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Thanks! :twilightblush:



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I aim to please :pinkiesmile:


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Thank you:pinkiehappy:

but hell I was a fan of the show for years

You were the chosen one, It was said that you would stop it!
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Gonna be vanilla and vote for Ghostbusters. Because I've never seen it before and feel seeing it in a ponitheater would be a suitable substitute to watching it myself.

Knowing Lyra's personality I'm gonna go with movie 1. Movie 2 doesn't sound bad though. I just look forward to a lot of chaos.

Who are you going to call?


GHOSTBUSTERS!

Always a sucker for pop cu!ture references, so I vote ghostbusters:pinkiehappy:
FYI the canon name is Applewood, as shown on the official map of Equestrian. Its shown to be near Los Pegasus on the western coast, surrounded by smog/clouds. (Not Las Pegasus, in Neighvada):twilightsmile:

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The votes have spoken. Ghostbusters wins by one vote; however, since it was so close I may go ahead and do an alternate chapter for the other highest voted movie. Return to the Crystal Empire, or I may just write a story completely about that idea on its own. open to suggestions.

4347972 You could do a what if scenario to see the difference but I'd rather read a story about it on itself.

Oh god lol

I was gonna vote return to the crystal empire but im too late it seems s:

Any idea when the next chapter is coming? Or is this the end?

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The next chapter should be out around saturday. That's when I'm planning on uploading it to the site, and nope, the story isn't done yet. Much like Drax99's Room for Rent, Be Careful What You Wish For is an episodic story. It does have overlying arcs, but it should be considered something similar to the bastard lovechild of a 1980's, 1990's, and early 2000's sitcom.

I don't know how long I am going to make the story, but I can promise you a few things for certain. One, I won't leave any of you guys hanging. I will give notice and at least two chapters after my notice when I'm about the end the story.

Two, Unlike a lot of my stories this is going to attempt to stay closer to the comedy, sex, and general feel good aspects. I may do some social commentary, but it's going to be done in the way various sitcoms have done before.

Three, and last one, I am going to try to have fun with this story. This story is being written for pure fun. Even the concept for why this story is being written was done in fun.

All in all, thanks!

LF:pinkiehappy:

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Awesome, I believe that I may go ahead and do this!

Seems like something he would do. But what kind of streams would they cross?

WHAT DID YOU DO RAY!!!!!

I like this I think you have Don down from what I have read in room for rent cant wait to read more but xcom is calling

Mine! Tad bit creepy there yet enticeing

Yeah, that seems exactly like the sort of thing he would pull.

The very idea that they would even think of using marshmallow fluff to feed anyone makes me think this...

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Just sayin cause thats a scary amount of sugar.:pinkiesick:

you take protein supplements

Actually, considering how easy it is to get your daily need of protein, he should be getting IRON supplements, as it is as important, and a lot harder to get in high amounts.

I wonder if this is gonna be cannon in the Room for Rent universe. if so,is their gonna be a crossover?

4425584 Meh, still waiting to see where it goes before I decide if it will become part of R4R. Louis visiting Ponyville is still far off in the future, and I'm still trying to decide if Don's departure will be part of the main story.:unsuresweetie:

On a side note, the real Don has officially dubbed this story "Creepy".:rainbowlaugh:

EDIT: the real DON... stupid tablet.

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I'm just glad that you're letting me play around in your universe.

Haha I dont get the "Mine" part but it still left me in tears of laughter.:rainbowlaugh:

It's always good to give new things a try... at least there was some fun on both sides.

i really like this story! more!:pinkiecrazy:

Do continue your fine work! :pinkiehappy:

I wonder how those kids unlocked the cabin.....

lol cupcakes HD funny. anyway likeing the story and indeed don't question pinkie's actions

I have not seen that movie in years!:pinkiegasp: old movie nostalgia!

very nice chapter. But I have a feeling lyra and don wont rent another movie like that, ..... wait... what if he rented the old g1 MLP movie?:pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::raritydespair::fluttershbad::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

saw some spelling errors and grammar errors here and there, but it didn't bug me to much, it did make a few scenes confusing when hes or shes were reversed.:twilightsheepish: but still and over all good chapter. sorry for not pointing things out but I read part of this while playing ff14arr and I stayed up late for the rest.

Oh man, what a fantastic time to pick up this story, right when a great new chapter came out. I don't know about Flutters as Inigo, but I really liked Derpy as Fezzik. Discord as Miracle Max was pretty great too.

Edit: This applies to R4R too, but I keep having to remind myself that these aren't the cartoon marshmallow ponies we're all used to.

It can only go uphill from here.....right?

Lavander and with the name dusk could that be a rule 63 pony or just random pony

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I can neither confirm nor deny.


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I'm not going to go into much, but one thing to consider about Don is he's not much of a fighter. This was a situation that someone happened to act before thinking, so it's not too likely he's going to be looking to have something similar happen again.

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ouch. I guess healing magic isn't the instant thing some people make it out to be in their stories

And here are the tears... Thanks I so needed this...:fluttershysad:

I for one would find Discord's perspective interesting.

Discord and Flutters is in heat. This is going to be good.

i think fluttershy turns in lustyshy :D do it!!

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