• Published 9th Mar 2014
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Diamond's Humiliation - Matt11



Scootaloo Has Been Made Fun Of For The Last Time When Rich Is In The Need Of A Foal Sitter Scootaloo Has Big Plans For Revenge

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I Hate You Daddy

Filthy Rich had just finished removing the foolish items. The diapers, the clothing, the pacifier... Then he came into view of his precious little angel, Diamond Tiara, who was in a soaked diaper.

“This is ridiculous,” he scowled. “Why would anypony do this to my precious little angel? She must have felt so ashamed and embarrassed from all of this.”

Filthy reached down and hit his daughter softly on her stomach to try and get her to wake up. “Diamond, wake up! you look ridiculous in that get up.”

Diamond Tiara fluttered her eyes open. Everything was blurry after a minute she saw her father.

“W-Where is momma?” Diamond Tiara asked, not even noticing her soaked diaper. She got up, trying to escape from the crib, but realized it was too big. “Where’s Momma? Where is Scootaloo?” Diamond Tiara asked on the verge of tears.

Filthy Rich couldn't stand seeing his daughter in this state. He reached down, pulled Diamond Tiara out of the crib, and placed her on the ground.

“Now Diamond, I want you to get out of that diaper and get dressed like a normal pony,” he said calmly. “And you don’t have to worry my little angel. That filly will never bother you again because I fired her,” he finished firmly.

Diamond Tiara felt tears escape. For once she had a mother and all of it was being taken from her again. Tiara won't let that happen.

Tears were now falling down her cheeks. “NO! I won’t take it off until Momma changes me!” Diamond yelled at her father. “She may not have been my real mother but at least she cares for me! Unlike you, DADDY!” the last word was full of malice.

Filthy flinched at that. “Why, you listen here young lady! I do care for you! Who do you think buys you things, gets you your hooficures, and gives you as much money as you want? Honestly, sometimes I'm glad your mother is dead!” Filthy rich said before he could stop himself. He recoiled in horror as the words left his mouth.

Diamond Tiara felt anger rising in her chest. She walked closer to her father, her eyes narrowed to slits. “Y-You're glad she's gone?” When she got no reaction she snarled and Diamond Tiara marched to the door. “FINE! If that’s how you want it, I’m going to live with Scootaloo! At least she loves me! And buying me tons of things doesn’t mean I love you! I HATE YOU, DADDY!”

Before Filthy could respond, Diamond opened the door, walked out and slammed it shut behind her, the noise recoiling of the mansion walls long after.

For several seconds he just stood there, his brain unable to absorb what had just happened.
His daughter felt loved… by a pony she’d always said she’d hated and that had put her through this foalish and demeaning charade, but she wanted to go to her anyway? She wanted to live with that filly more than she did her own father?

The reality of what this implied pierced his stone heart like a cold knife, causing his legs to buckle.

Filthy fell to the floor and felt tears get released from the stalwart prisons that were his eyes. He looked to the door, the last spot his daughter had been, and just cried, occasionally whispering, “I’m sorry…”

Author's Note:
Comments ( 35 )

4369677 its updated :pinkiehappy:

4379091 what? i take it you liked it?

That was....wow

4379188 yeah well..wow...

4379557 this was my 1st padded pony story... I promise the sequel will be better

4379570 its fine.

I am very shocked

Filthy should've been in shock for a few seconds after diamond left before breaking down.

Other that that, this made perfect sense. I look forward to the sequel and I will edit this like you asked. I think I can add a little more too to give it more oof:raritywink:

did diamond just storm out decked in All her Baby stuff?
:pinkiegasp:Sequel as in continuation of this story,:yay: This will be great, if I may be so bold, will the sequel be isolated, like a secret between Scootaloo and DT or will diamond openly show affection to her?

4411942 haven't decided yet was planning on twi accadently turning both into foals then the seqal would be adorable

Seems to me you might have explained a bit more in the previous chapter about how Scootaloo reminded Diamond of her mother. Even a comment like "I don't wanna talk about it," would have been something. And for the not-so-quick(me, in this case) what did that potion Scootaloo took do?

4430371 well it did not turn her into a mare but it did give her the strength of a mare that is one thing I should of explained a little better.

poor kid and poor father. Great first attempt at writing.

4466589 thanks, it was my 1st padded pony story but im makeing a new one right now and it will be alot better then this one

Can't wait for sequel

4547787 thanks I all so got this story if ur interested in reading it Fluttershy and Rainbow's little foal

Hmm.. All in all this really seems like an interesting story. When I read the first chapter I though it was over and the Revenge was set, now that I see the second chapter you kinda open up a lot of things. You showed that Diamond was accepting her role in this punishment as if Scootaloo was actually her pretend mom for the simple fact of one thing "Love". I also really liked how that important lesson "Money can't buy love" (I feel like that's from a song, anyway) This is really good but I think you ended the chapter early. If I could make a suggestion let's say the story continued on where Diamond visits twilight's library in hopes of meeting Scootaloo again, and after an explanation Scootaloo is now shocked that Diamond may have accepted (Maybe imprinted) Scootaloo as her portrayed mother. This is just an Idea, you don't have to go with it. All in all this is a cute story with twists and turns and I can't to see how the sequel plays out.

Rate: 3 1/2 / 5
Emotions::heart::derpyderp2::twilightblush::pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2:

4547823 that was awsome...pls tell me when you get out the sequel...i cant wait!:yay:

Pleas make a sequel

Matt11 do you at least have a name for the sequel so I can check on it or find it when you post the first chapter

I would've liked this story alot more if you didn't stick in the rainbow X twilight shipping

5377895 I'm guessing ya don't like lesbion shipping.

5377910 I just think that it's been very overdone in the fandom

5377919 I like TwiDash a lot any thing I like I normally add but not on all my story's.

5377924 Honestly, I think it's a little tacky ship the mane 6 w/ each other (ex. rarijack, flutterdash, etc.) but not as much as straight shipping (ex. soardash, twi sentry, etc.)

5377928 I can't see Rarity and AJ dating lol that ship is kinda odd.

5377941 that's exactly my point, actually. people are just shipping for the sake of shipping and it's getting a little bit annoying

5377947 I do like ScootaBell though it never gets old and RumbleLoo is cool

5377951 personally, I like buttonbelle and cheesypie the best

SEQUEL...SEQUEL...SEQUEL !!!!!!! we're seeing a side of dt that is just so adorable. daddy just doesn't understand. dt needed this, so much. she misses her mother. I really feel for her.

You should really make a sequel.
Just what is going to happen to Scootaloo and DT now? I mean are TS and RD going to cancel her punishment? Is FR going to start babying DT himself?

6263240 I plan to rewrite it just haven't got the best idea as to how it should be re written. Surpringly I wrote this when I hated DT now my thoughts about her changed

6263300 Maybe Scootaloo takes the potion because Diamond Tiara tells her how she wants a mother that actually loves her, and Scootaloo decides to treat Diamond Tiara like a foal for a while to get even with all the times she teased her. But she quickly stops doing so when she realizes how much it's hurting Diamond Tiara.

that ending though...but great story

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