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In a city of opportunity, Suri thought she had left Ponyville far behind. Even the fashion show was going to be perfect. But when Suri discovered Rarity was joining the competition, Suri found herself dealing with more than just fabric choice. As deadlines loom, Suri feels herself becoming unraveled.
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Well you kind of made me feel for her. No one likes to be shown up. It's natural to feel resentment.
Well that was very good. I admire how you reinterpreted a one-note character and actually made her interesting. Although I do question the lack of a dark tag. It got quite unsettling at points I must say.
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Because I'm dumb and thought it had already been placed. Thanks for the look out.
3782542 Don't thank me... it's what I do.
(Rides out into the sunset on an awesome horse never to be seen again.)
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Lord Bravery just makes that comment.
3782770 And I think you are person number 15 on this site to get that reference. You heard this statement in your head since I left never to be seen again.
Not bad, I like your characterization of Suri and her relationship with Coco. The way it's eaten at her life, and how she craves revenge so desperatley she doesn't see what an animal she's become in the process.
All in all, a nice, fitting story.
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I was hoping you'd enjoy it, given your name.
Wow... I'm lost for words.. In a good way.
She may have been rude in the show, but I really liked her a lot. She wasn't one of those antagonists that you could hate, you know?
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. You also have the best avatar in the history of ever.
Now this is some fucking fantastic character development, loved it.
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Glad you enjoyed it, also appreciate the follow. That makes you my 50th! The prize you receive is approximately one internet high five. *Fives*
Not bad i give it a good 7/10
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I cried.
Damn.
Coco and Suri's relation was almost frighteningly realistic.
And it really does show just how screwed in the head someone with her mentality would be.