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Twilight Sparkle was having a wonderful day listening to records when suddenly her precious gramophone got knocked over! She now journeys to the music store in town to recover a new one and perhaps experience some of the new music the young colts and fillies are into these days.

Written as part of a challenge presented in The Writers Group found here.

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I think it was pretty good. I'm pretty sure there's a TV Trope for what this story is, but I'm too lazy to bather finding out.

Poor Twi. Oh, and the store clerk. He might get some sympathy. Possibly. Probably not. I'm too emotionless to care, actually.

I couldn't find any grammatical errors, but then again, I wasn't looking too hard. I was more focused on the story itself. :pinkiehappy:

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Honestly, if there was a trope, I wouldn't be terribly surprised. It feels like there's a trope for just about everything under the sun these days.

2815466 I think there is. And we'll only get more as time passes. I'm still to lazy to look it up. I think it was something to do with the character going through the story, only to fail in the original objective.

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I'm pretty sure somewhere in the future fiction will no longer be about coming up with anything new but instead seeing what tropes haven't been done in years.

Also, Commander Fluttershy makes me happy.

2815533 It makes me happy too. That's why I chose it. Originally, I was gonna do Steampunk Pinkie Pie, but Fimfiction didn't agree with it, so I chose this one instead.

THE ONLY MARE I EVER LOVED
WAS BORN WITH ROSES IN HER EYES

also:

along with other other artists she’d never even heard of, like Panic! At the Rodeo

>Twilight
>Not listening to Panic! at the Disco
stay pleb

and
>Panic! at the Rodeo
>Not Party! at the Disco
son you have failed

other than that, amazing story. I had a hearty chuckle.

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sides.exe has stopped working

Also, I did debate Party! At the Disco, but it wound up turning into a weird meta joke about Pinkie Pie having a band at one point that she never talks about due to mysterious circumstances.

2815847 It's because Pinkie had a secret affair with Brendon Urie and he doesn't want Sarah to find out and oh my god have you seen their wedding photos they're fucking adorable
I'm secretly a teenaged girl don't tell anyone

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YOU'RE A TEENAGE GIRL!?

...shit...

2815876 call the po po
I'm not really, but I might as well be
Patrick Stump was fucking adorable as the best man
and Pete too I guess

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I think it was pretty good. I'm pretty sure there's a TV Trope for what this story is, but I'm too lazy to bather finding out.

At least three, but the only one that springs to mind by name at the moment is Wafer Thin Mint. That, of course, and Epic Fail.

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