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Vigilance


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Sequel to Of Princesses and Changelings.

A month has passed since the events of the last story and now Cadence has been taken to the Changeling lands in the hopes that getting to know the Changelings better will help her get over the deep seated bigotry she holds. Everything is not peaceful in the Changeling ranks, however, and tensions between the species' hives could spell doom for Cadence.

Meanwhile Shining Armor, not wholly convinced of his wife's actions, sets out to discover what really happened to Cadence during her attempts to take down Chrysalis.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 26 )

Yay! A new Vigilance story! Let me just like it, and fave it, and now I can read it.

You should fix your sequel link in the description

3778794 It wasn't originally going to be a link, but now that you have suggested it...

*tinkers a bit*

Ta-dah! Link!

Per the orders of the Collective, you are to write and post another chapter immediately, and they'll burn your house down.

...

Or.

Or they'll burn your house down. Did they write this command card with a licorice stick?

Boy I loved the first story I can't wait to see how this one plays out. Hope Cadence reverts back to evil that was cool. :pinkiecrazy: I hope she gets a cool cloak like in the picture too but that's just my own personally hope. Is Discord going to be in it again and break the fourth wall? Please :pinkiehappy: Can't wait for the next chapter

YES!!! SEQUEL!! Shape shift better be a major character this time.

3779508 The Changelings would never waste a perfectly good licorice stick writing commands! They love licorice too much to do something so heinous.

It was probably written with the blood and semen of their enemies, cause that's what all the cool nations do.

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Blood and... Oh, ew.

Ew!

Ew ew ew ew ew ew!

Cut off my hands! Somebody cut off my hands!

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So like the Imperium of man, Crazy Fantic who woeshop their gods in own pool of jizz and blood.

WE on good start when we Imperium of Man Ripoff

I'm really digging this story so far :twilightsmile:

Another month... Cadence is in denial if she thinks that she can get rid of the voice in her head.

Course, detective Shining is now on the case, I'm expecting we'll see some of his investigations more next time. What kind of evidence could Shining possibly find to incriminate, or even suggest a squeaky clean, Cadence?

I am not sure, but this chapter definitely feels different than when I read it the first time. It's a better kind of different, as if the PoV's were expanded with more details and insight. Forgive me if that is not the case, but it certainly seems that way.

so... This story is going to continue? Because the history of before was very good

I really, really hope whatever Carapace is doing will not cause a relapse in Cadence. She really only needs a trigger to get set off...

Knowing how these stories have gone, it's likely it will.

Too bad that this is dead, I really liked the previous one. :fluttercry:

Cya
Raziel-chan

Gone forever, never to be written further

Uhm sir could I please have some more?
What was that, a peasant asking for more!
B-But sir I would very much enjoy more.
Well you shall have none from me!
I said I would very much ENJOY MORE!:flutterrage:
:raritydespair:Fine you may have more in the future.Filthy peasant.

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