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It is Nightmare Night and Princess Luna is off to Ponyville for the festivities, leaving her Lunar Guards with the night off. As the night goes on however, the Lunar Guards left in Canterlot must face threats to themselves and the city. A one shot about Lunar Guard antics as they fight for Canterlot, their Princess, and their own lives.

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Well I was going to submit this on October 31st, as a sort of Halloween special. But with my area begin one of the many about to be back-handed by Hurricane Sandy I thought I'd submit it now, in case I don't have Internet come Wednesday.

I hope you all enjoy the comedy and the butt-kicking that is the Lunar Guard.

This is amazing and I love the ending:trollestia:

Not bad, not bad. :trixieshiftright:

Simply put, I hope you add other more than 11000 words chapters .:pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2: Please:raritydespair:
This was awesome and amazing (Not much vocabulary in my brain from all the flabbergasting) .:rainbowdetermined2::moustache::twilightsmile: The lunar guards should be 65% based upon your fanfic.:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

In the canon series and pretty much in the fan fiction that is.:twilightsmile:

This has interesting ideas but quickly begins to jump around topics with little to no connection or warning and generally devolves into a sequence of unconnected one-shots and random jokes. Some more time spent on connecting the sections (or at least providing clear segues between them) would help a lot.

That ending!! *giggles*

The ending was hilarious and the rest of the story was GREAT.:twilightblush::twilightblush:

Well they certainly succeeded in not concerning her with the night's events, but I think they'd better let her know what happened. Maybe in the morning would be better?

A general all around thank you to all those that enjoyed the story, I am pleased that you found it worth the reading. Here, have a heart :heart:

1531654 Yes indeed it does, an unfortunate side effect of trying to include two plot lines in a one-shot (it's never wise to that but for some reason me=:derpytongue2:) I tried my best for segues, leaving off at certain drop-off points that seemed good... but it wasn't seamless, obviously. Ah well, there's always next time :pinkiesmile:.

1533974 Probably, but how would you go about that? "Oh hey Princess Luna by the way, just so you know, your thousand year old curse just tried to kill us last night in a variety of ways." It will be very awkward conversation.

Bwahahaha, oh god, that ending.

This has to be canon.

That was awesome.

It was good read but the ending I think was the best part. I only imagine the look on the night guards face when hearing about the curse.

One unarmored mare on a nearby bench instinctively went to try and preen herself, only to be met with fleshy batwings and an embarrassed look that no other guard took heed of (all the pegasus guards that had undergone the magical surgery that applied the batwings had done the same thing at least once).

i remember a story where Batponies were accidentally created by a magic potion that was supposed to just help them see in the dark better...

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