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Therisinghero


Your local hero!

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Two ordinary FDNY Emt's working their regular shift fall upon a strange call that they are confused at. their current predicament being this call is out of their jurisdiction, but they respond to it anyway but upon responding they become apart of the biggest rescue of their career.

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Comments ( 27 )

I think you might need to remove the YouTube link and resubmit the story.

(waitaminute...)

Hmm... EMTs in Equestria. A unique concept, definitely one I haven't seen before. Going right to the read later list.

Edit: Ok, well to put it simply this needs an editor, badly. But this does have potential so I'll watch this.

EMT's in Equestria eh? Let's see what we got here! :rainbowdetermined2:

With the sirens blaring through the streets getting through traffic was a breeze

Just an FYI... This never actually happens! :rainbowlaugh: People do really unpredictable things with a rolling disco ball behind them. :facehoof:

This has great potential behind it. But, honestly, you really should find an editor. Grammatical errors and sudden jumps in the story can distract from the overall quality. :twilightblush:

Intresting, first fic I know to have an EMT crew in Equestria. For what should happen next, well it's obvious isn't it, these two seem to be the only ones around who can help. That pony's not going to last much longer without surgery. Yeah they're only trained in first aid medicence, but under the circumstances they'll just have to learn what to do as they go. :eeyup:

Thanks guys for the support I am currently looking for an editor And I can not edit it at this moment because I have left my PC at my house and the only other way to communicate is using my android phone so I can't to it until this Monday

3753340 go for it just send me a finished copy and ill put it in

3756214 go for email isend you a pm containing the adress

alright guys ive narrowed it down here are the three choices that i have that i will put in chapter 2 but keep in mind you can only choose one popular vote will decide what will go

A. twilight shows up in chapter 2 and meets the emt's and so on

B. bon bon panics and goes looking for lyra and bumps into the ambulance

c. princess luna comes by wondering whats going on

3766442 Hmm, tough choices there. If it was me I would go with both A and B due to the fact of BonBon being frantic on where Lyra is and Twilight being curious about the strange "Creature" that just came zooming through town.

ok thats two votes for B and one for A if one of them goes to ten then I'll go with that one

To be honest, I haven't really seen anything of this nature, but it would be nice to see more, i vote for idea B, though seeing A and b mixed in wouldn't hurt....considering I haven't seen at any point that they turned OFF the lights and siren once crossing over.

4074827 ok i may consider that but I need to wait for my cowriter to be on in order for chapter 2 to be started on

4805154 you wold be correct i think i might cancel it

4805939 I would but the guy I had is no longer working with me and he has the only copy but if your looking for an emergency service story look at this

There's no way to say it subtly or diplomatically. Some crossovers simply do not work.

8179557 to true and to be honest I was really naive when I was co writing this and it would have went over as well as a turd in a punch bowl.... I also find it better to tell stories by making videos out of them but there lies a problem I am not the most talented artist so I have to rely on other people for the content and its kinda nerve wracking when you have a story you want to share but cant due to the lack of content you have but still want to share it....
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