Four days after the invasion three changelings strive to survive in the sewers of Canterlot. Their kind is gone, and they have no idea how, or whether there are any changelings left from their army. With the likely possibility that their hive now tries to select its new leader in a vicious battle, the trio of drones decide to stay away from home for a while. They plan to return when they have a higher chance of survival in their own home, than in Equestria, where they are surrounded by enemies. But for now the changelings’ chance to stay alive lies in a quiet little village near the great city of Canterlot.
Cover art by the Great and Powerful Fantos
Some of the chapters were pre-read byBeerforce, goddamnAnimalPlanet and Zenith042.
Chapters (17)
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Also great story so far!
NEED MOAR
I love it that Pinkie knows that they are changelings but is friendly enough to not expose them.
Interesting, I would like to see were this will be going.
There are a few places that looked like words were auto-corrected... well... incorrectly.
Overall, while it could use a little polish, the premise is interesting, and I'm curious to see where this goes.
Another fun chapter by CrutioAstarothChaos. Out of curiosity, what was you inspirations to make this?
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Thank you FanficCrusader, I would really like to know where it happened, so maybe I could avoid it in the future. My mother language isn't english, and while I'm trying to do my best, sometimes mistakes happen.
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Well, to put it simply: I needed a chapter before the chapter that describes the details of the party. After all, no one could just come to Ponyville and expect to live there without a Pinkie Welcoming party, now could they?
2420001 Forgive me for not being more specific, what I meant to ask was "What inspired to write this story as a whole?" Not just this specific chapter.
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(I warned you all!)
Oh, that, ehheh
Well... I'm unsure... I guess I always wanted to write a changeling fic, I was just waiting for a good idea. I read a whole lot of changeling fics, like: An Affliction of the Heart by Anonymous Pegasus, Changing Times by Silent Quill, Body and Mind by Starman Ghost, Without a Hive by Phoenix_dragon, and all of these were great works, but usually featured one changeling as the center of the story, probably converting from one side to the other (Except 'Without a Hive', that's still my number one favorite for not doing so).
SPOILER ALERT!
And I guessed: why not put a group of changelings in the whole convertion thing? See how well that turns out? One creature can easily justify its own actions for itself, but when there are three creatures, they must also think about what the other two would think of it.
So yeah, now I spoiled some of it didn't I?
2420666 I have read all of the Fics you have mentioned, and I love them all!
nearly coughed up my drink at redheart...props to her
Ouch.
Luna, da fuq.
WHAT THE BUCK
We don't know where you are
[insert Luna parody of meme]
But we will find you and make you pay for your crimes
I wonder if you are going to do a chapter where Buzzer and/or his brothers explain themselves to Luna in the Dream World. Oh well, guess I'll have to stay tuned to find out.
Please continue dude!
Redheart clop :3
Valve? Crowbar?
That looks alot like Half-Life
Dun dun dun
I like the suspense, makes it more interesting.
Ow come on! Another cliffhanger?
But hey, great story so far
Well, it's an interesting and entertaining story, but it could use some technical work. Sentence structure, misused words, a few typos, those kinds of things. Sometimes it's hard to "get" the changeling, but I suspect that they're supposed to be slightly alien like that.
Anyway, thumb up and fav, I'm interested in seeing where this story's going.
Edit: Ah, so English isn't your native language? That explains some of the oddities of style and phrasing. English isn't my native language either, but I like to think that I've got a decent handle on it.
Aw crap I ran out of chapters to read. I hope you write more of this soon.
lol when I ffirst saw the cover art it looked like the middle one was wearing socks and the far right one was wearing a onesy with a fluffy neck
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Thank you
Methinks Redheart has a crush.
Who's him? You mean her?
Weee! Update.
Celestia I love this story! These changelings are quickly becoming my favorite changelings and thats hard to do with so many great changeling stories out there.
hey! Its good to see you around. nice job on the ficarooni, dude.
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"Him", as in Shiftlight.
That last sentence ha ha ha ha! Oh shit this is bad!
Such suspense! More!!
Moooore!
This is good I like these 3 changelings. I hope we don't see the last of them any time soon though. I be really happy to see a sequel!
This Fan-fic is just great!
I shall wait patiently for the next amazing chapter
What he said.
This is the worst place to end the story! Was so good though, thanks for writing.
Three words: That sequel hook.
Freedom just so short...Don't back to your hive! 3 brother!! Show me your Wing of Liberty!
good job bro, can't wait to see the sequel.
Buzzer Thorax and shift light?
Thats like nameing someone Runner, Abdomen, or Clothes Changer.
Oh no its Private Eye Pinkie Pie, she is sure to discover the brother identities.
I hope the endless switching back and forth of the fake and real names ends soon.
Its just confusing me a bit.
Sounds like these three changelings are going a little soft in the shell.
heh see what i did there.
Shiftlight says something then Lancet replies, its very hard to remember they are
seperate beings when you use both names in such close proximity.
What is a heart really?
A hollow muscle that pumps blood throughout ones body?
Or is it something much more that that?
An emotional out burst that has lead to the posibility of them being discovered.
Didnt see that coming.
So yeah im not very good at sarcasm.
What did lancet do i wonder?
I've read a few stories that utilize the fact that, as horses,
mares would go into heat every so often.
I like the way you aproached the fact.