• Published 30th Dec 2013
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Equestrian Wars: Rise of Carthage - Wolf-Baron



One thousand years ago, Celestia exiled them. Now, they are back and they are seeking retribution!

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Chapter 2: War on the Horizon.

Degrelle was walking through the hallways of the Carthage capital building with his SK soldiers guarding him like black armored hawks. The walls were beautifully decorated with paintings and sculptures of many famous anthros and humans of Carthage’s past years. There used to be pictures of King Ivan and his son Arthur but Degrelle had them removed shortly after he seized power for obvious reason. Along the walls were paintings and busts of Julius Scipio, the human general who founded Carthage over a thousand years ago and whom the capital was named after.

Degrelle was a great admirer of him and he talked very extensively about him in chapter 4 of his book, The Carthaginian Struggle; particularly his strategic victory over the ponies during the Battle of Dead Mare’s Gulley during the Lunar-Celestial war a thousand years ago. Degrelle and all of his military officers personally carried a copy of Scipio’s famous strategy guide, The Majesty and Way of Warfare. Even though it was written when the humans and furries marched into battle with halberds, spears, and swords, many of his strategies and logistical tactics still held up for modern warfare. It was a must read for any skilled commander of an army. According the military intelligence, even a few pony commanders in Equestria had a copy which they studied.

Walking next to Degrelle was a middle aged human named Dieter Malickovich. Malickovich was an old friend of Degrelle and they both served together during the Great Carthage Civil War. While at first they both distrusted each other, they soon bonded and formed a personal friendship after they saved each other’s lives. After the war, Degrelle helped Malickovich to join the Sasha party and because of his expertise as a commander of special forces, Degrelle personally had Malickovich appointed as head of the SK brigade. Dieter was dressed in a black Carthage military officer’s uniform with war decorations and medals on his chest. He wore a black cap with the Carthaginian cross centered at a piece on the front of it. And more famously, he wore his red and black striped sash, the symbol of the Sasha party.

“My Caudillo, that was an excellent speech!” he congratulated his old friend. Degrelle smiled back and nodded in a rather friendly gesture.
“Ah yes that was. I can’t’ tell you the many hours of sleep I lost practicing and prepping it.” He laughed back. Malickovich smiled and giggled in response.
“I am afraid you will lose much more sleep soon my friend.” he answered. “The military council has been bickering and arguing these past few days.”
Degrelle frowned and nodded his head. “I presume over the plans of war?” he asked with concern.
Malickovich nodded back sadly. “I’m afraid they disagree on too much.”
But Degrelle’s smile returned and he patted his friend’s shoulder. “No matter, I understand that they will have differences. However, I recently had a discussion with field marshal Solomon a few days ago.”
Malickovich tilted his head with question. “The high commander of the 10th Army?” he asked.
Degrelle nodded back with a smile. “He told me he has a plan of attack which will surely impress the military council.”
Malickovich smiled back and nodded in reply.
“I am looking forward to hearing it.” He answered back.
Degrelle then suddenly stopped, his bodyguards stopped with him and stood guard. He once again placed his paws on his friend’s shoulder.

“Dieter my friend I must ask you something,” he said with a serious but excited tone in his voice.
“Yes sir anything.” Dieter replied.
“I won’t be able to make it to the meeting today.” Degrelle said with seriousness.
Dieter was shocked and awed by this. Degrelle had never missed a meeting on important issues.
“But Aljesandro why?!” Dieter asked with worry. But Degrelle smiled back and nodded.
“It is my daughter Desdemona.” He answered. Desdemona was Degrelle’s daughter whose beauty was famous throughout Carthage. She was a faired haired wolfess in her early twenties with silky black blue hair and soft fur. Degrelle raised her by himself as his wife had been tragically killed by a communist terrorist attack.
“Oh how is she?” Dieter asked very politely. “Is everything alright?”
Degrelle laughed and smiled back. “Of course she is.”

He then turned away as his bodyguards watched his back. “As you are aware, her womb is pregnant with child. She has a doctor’s appointment today and I wish to be there with her.” He answered back with pride.
Malickovich congratulated his friend and asked, “But how will you keep an eye on the council?”
“Simple.” Degrelle began, “where is my son Romulus?”
“I’m right here father!” a young human man suddenly addressed in the distant hallway as he approached Degrelle with a bright smile.

“Romulus!” Degrelle cheered back surprised and full of happiness as he extended his arms and paws to hug his son. Romulus was actually Degrelle’s first child. However, he was not Degrelle’s natural child; he was adapted.

Romulus was born in a very poor neighborhood to extremely abusive parents. He was kicked out at a very young age and lived on the street stealing food and money in order to survive. Degrelle found him trying to pick his pocket and rather than have his SK beat the child, he instead chose to raise him as his own. Romulus loved his step father very dearly and was very loyal to him. At a young teenage age, Degrelle had Romulus trained by his SK and he was a very gifted student. He graduated top of his class and at the very young age of twenty five, he was commander of the SK’s special Jaeger division, the military special forces branch of the SK.

“Ah Romulus you’ve have grown into such a fine young man!” Degrelle praised. Romulus was a very handsome twenty nine year old human with jet black silky hair which was shortened due to the military hair style code. He wore a much decorated SK uniform and had a Browning HP 9mm, the standard issue pistol of the military and the SK, strapped to his right hip safely guarded in a holster.
“My son, I have a job for you.” Degrelle said as he led his son to with him.
Romulus nodded. “Yes father, anything!”

Degrelle smiled and giggled at his son’s excitement. “As you are aware, your sister has a doctor’s appointment to check on the child in her womb and make sure nothing is wrong. I wish to be with her but this will cause me to miss today’s council meeting.” He then pointed to Malickovich. “Well you join Commander Malickovich and record the council meeting for me?”
Romulus gasped with disbelief. “You… you … really want me to?” he asked with a stutter. Degrelle laughed and patted his son on the back.
“Of course!” he said back with delight. “You’ve proven yourself more than worthy of being a great military leader. It’s time you studied with the greatest minds in our military!”
Romulus smiled back and almost squealed with glee, but then he composed himself professionally.
“I will be honored to do so father!” he responded with a serious tone but an excited smile on his face.
Degrelle nodded back and touched his son’s face. “Your sister and I are very proud. And if your step mother were still alive to see you, she would be proud to.”
Degrelle then ordered his guards to escort him and he went his separate ways from Malickovich and Romulus and headed to his private car to pick up his daughter from the university where she was going to school. Malickovich then turned his attention to Romulus.
“Come.” He ordered. “the council is expecting us.”
Romulus saluted back and followed his commander to the war room where the council was preparing for their war strategy.


Princess Celestia was pacing back and forth in the Royal hall of her throne room her hooves making a clopping sound. While normally Celestia was optimistic and calm alicorn, the past few days she had been having horrible nightmares. She was having visions of fire and smoke and her subjects screaming and suffering. It had made her uneasy and she looked out the window very very nervously. She tried to calm her nerves with her royal duties but the nightmares continued to get worse and worse. Her thoughts were interrupted however and her large door entry opened with a loud noise as a white Earth pony wearing shining gold painted armor stepped in.

“Your majesty!” he addressed with surprise. Celestia jumped a little.
“Oh…ah…yes captain?” she asked back in a rather exhausted tone. The captain noticed this and bowed down with respect.
“A thousand pardons your majesty, but your sister Princess Luna is here to see you.” He explained.
Celestia recovered from her shock and reaffirmed her figure.
“Oh okay.” She answered back. “Tell her I’ll be on my way. I need to take care of something first.”
The royal guard bowed in respect. “Yes your majesty.” He addressed back as he headed back to the door.
Before Celestia left to greet her sister, she used her horn to summon a piece of paper and a quill and ink. Holding the paper and inking the quill with her magic, she wrote:


To my faithful friend Twilight Sparkle,
These past few days I have been having troubling thoughts and suspicions. I wish to speak with you as soon as possible.

Your dear friend, Princess Celestia.

Once she was finished writing, with a puff of magic, the note disappeared in a puff of purple smoke. She then gathered herself to meet her sister.
“I just hope my dreams are not correct this time.” She said nervously this time. The last time she had these thoughts was over a thousand years ago, before her sister betrayed her. They were usually a sign that war was on the horizon.

Comments ( 88 )

3702976 Thank you. Although, don't expect any action until chapter three. That's when the Carthaginians launch their attack.

Hmm. This is getting interesting.

3712081 Your welcome. I'm a little bit confuse on what's going on.

3712142 Oh? What are you confused about? I'd love to hear what you have to say and how I can improve on it.

3712184 Well. Is Luna going to help the Carthage?

3712192 I'm still thinking about that idea. I do plan to make Luna's feelings towards the upcoming human/pony war conflicted.

3712488 If you've ever played a Killzone game, you should know that the 'bad guys' are pretty much space Nazis. Since the coverart seemingly depicts something from the Killzone universe then the fact that this guy acts like Hitler is appropriate.

Ha humans need no help we did it fine on our own well do it again!

3712659 Actually, the cover art is of the Kerberos Panzer cops from the Kerberos series.

3712488 Actually I named him after Belgian politician and Waffen SS commander and Nazi collaborator Leon Degrelle.

3716980 Never played Killzone Liberation. I've only played Killzone's 1-3.

3716987 Was that Liberation? And nobody played Liberation.

3717010 Yep. that was killzone liberation.

3717010 And this is what the Kerberos soldiers look like. i76.servimg.com/u/f76/12/26/63/89/jin0ro10.jpg

It's a very good manga.

3717019 You should just give them the Sta-5x Irradiated petrusite cannon or the Arc Cannon as it's also called. It was truly amazing using that gun in Killzone 3.

3717037 Well this is a Dieselpunk setting so they only really have Cold War and WW2 weapons. But Degrelle's scientists are working on a few toys.

3717037 They do use the MG-34 and MG-42.

3717382 Thanks for faving.

3717607 Humans should totally betray the Anthros or Furys just because us humans are far more superior and would make for an interesting twist and Drama!

Im just curious, and dont take this the wrong way, but why furries?

3722378 A combination of I am both a furry and a brony and I like the concept of humans and furries uniting together for a common goal.

3722855 Furrys deserve to burn...humans can stay of course :scootangel:

3724139 Why? By definition, the ponies in MLP FIM was technically "furry". Seriously, what's with all the furry hate?

3724256 Humans are superior. That is why. Seriously though good story, I hope to see another update soon.

3724256
Duno why people hate furries, despite the fact were on a site about fucking ponies but meh.

Besides furries are like humans mixed with various animals, so they're like half awesome or some shit...

3724646 I agree on this subject. I mean look at Disney they have furries that everyone loves, but when it comes to someone else furries they all of a sudden hate it. I mean that being a massive hypocrite and is stupid.

3725207 Even if your not a fan of furries you could easily just picture them as humans instead.

3728666 And you can't do that with non-Disney furries?

3728666 No, I am a fan of furries it just that when it come to Disney furies everyone loves them. I just don't get it at all. Someone else furries whether it be comics, movie, or cartoon receive lots of hate from the masses. It just doesn't make much sense.

3729140 Oh I'm terribly sorry! I'm so used to getting hate mail for being a furry that I misread your comment as anti-furry. I'm sorry.
Forgive me?

3729148 It's okay it happen!!! I just wanted to make sure that you now I wasn't sending any hate to your story. Anyway keep to coming, if they hate it let them. If they love it then let them. Just know that okay, it's your story and you can change it if you want. It's your power not theirs.:pinkiehappy:

3729148 Also yes I forgive you. No harmed done. :scootangel:

To put you in the mood for when the first shots of war begin listen to the command and conquer red alert series soundtrack to set the mood

3731148 Any particular songs?

3731148 And speaking of music, it was actually a Sabaton song that inspired me to write this.

3732593 This story somehow reminds me of this song:

3732753 Although, the inspiration for this story came from a Sabaton song.

Interesting story so far. I think you should add a horizontal rule when the POV switches to Celestia, the transition confused me a bit.

3754282 Thank you. And how do I add a horizontal rule? Like I said, editing has never been my greatest strength sadly.

3755086
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Once upon a time over a thousand years ago, two sisters controlled the pony occupied kingdom of Equestria. To keep harmony throughout the land, the eldest was in charge of the daytime. Everyone morning, she would rise to the sky with the morning sun and shine her light amongst her subjects while her youngest sister rose with the evening moon. However, while the subjects praises and basked in the glory of the eldest sister, the younger sister’s night was left ignored and forgotten. Angered with jealously, she turned against her sister and attempted to dethrone her. Understanding that she needed an army, she looked to an interesting choice; the humans and anthros who had occupied Equestria. Because they lived far from the normal ponies and were considered social outcasts and were discriminated and shunned by the general populace, they agreed to fight for the youngest princess. There was a short, but great war between the two sisters and their armies and when the eldest won using the Elements of Harmony, she banished her sister to the moon and the humans and anthros were left to the mercy of the ponies. Their leaders tried to negotiate a peace, but the ponies would have none of it and they convinced the eldest that they should face the same punishment as the youngest princess. The eldest then exiled the humans and the anthros to a long forgotten continent on the other side of the word; the continent of Carthage. For a thousand years, the people of Carthage lived in complete misery and suffering as Carthage was ravaged by chaos and violence driven even further by a seemingly never ended succession of madman, kings, and tyrants. Little did the ponies know that banishing man and furry kind, they left humanity with a burning desire to vengeance and retribution. And little did they soon realize that Carthage would rise again….

Wow....just wow.

I LOVE THIS DESCRIPTION!!!

3786999 Really? You like it?

3803401 Yes! it is very well written, not only that, it can catch the attention of the readers.

I was wondering in what season is this happening?

Season 1, 2, 3, 4, before Twilight becomes a princess, after.

3814506 Twilight is a princess.

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