It seems like only yesterday Spitfire and her older brother Mustang were just little foals playing and flying above the skies of Cloudsdale. She and Mustang were more than just family, they were friends. He was always there for her and helped shape her into the tough pegasus she is today. But now, she must face the most difficult challenge of her life; dealing with the loss of her own brother. Something no pony would ever want to do.
Even better than the rough draft I read! Good job!
Awwwww And one thing, a male baby pony is a colt and if you are referring to a male and a female they are foals.
Good chapter! Good luck with whatever's going on at home also.
4436493 Thanks for the advice.
Sad ending I lost my brother a true brother. Who joined the military and died last week Monday 10:31 pm.
This story reminds me of him
It makes me simple.
All the time.
When there someone whose turned down, give them your smile to brighten their day.
Very sad ending
Thank u all for listening.
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Best wishes and veteran day.
Thx
4464889 Actually, this isn't the ending. I plan to write two more chapters.
Oh. I'm sorry.
I didn't know, very well then, I hope the next two will,
Be very talented .
Thx u.
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You forgot a word.
Besides that, great job! Thumbs up from me!
great story I cried through the whole thing
4479185 Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Sees title- "Was this loosely based on a song I know?" Reads short description- "Apparently."
4959711 Hey it's a good song!
>>Wolf-Baron yes, it is a very good song
When r u going to write the 2 chapters
And here's a music I was playing games five nights at Freddy's
[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/TheLivingTombstone]
4997369 Been busy with work and writer's block. Also, HOLY shit! Five Nights at Freddy's? I only saw a walk through of that and it freaks me out!
This... This made me cry
I honestly don't know what Id do if I lost one or both of my brothers
5206932 Yeah I know.
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They're all the family I got left after my mom died back in 08
5206962 Oh i'm so sorry!
5206978
It's okay man. Was a long time ago
When you typed GW2, did you mean WW2 or does that stand for great war 2?
5207061 Great War Two. In my mlp/human world, both world wars are referred to as the "great wars". All the nations in my MLP world are fictional however, they are allegories for real life nations.
5207254 If you really want to get technical they are both the same war, just a twenty year or so intermission.
This will go great
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=tGE381tbQa8]
5250577 i can't see the video
Sorry
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XwxgMBNdh4E]
I have brought a new soundtrack and this inspire me and everyone I know today it brought to my attention, that its not only us in the world, in our galaxy.
Nooooo