• Member Since 12th Mar, 2012
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Gremlin Grenade


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The revolution has begun. Ponyville lies in burning ruins, and the devious Master Plan now marches on the Celestial throne. Alliances will be forged, secrets will be revealed, and the face of Equestria will change forever...

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 15 )

You kiddies were so patient, and I appreciate it. I promise I won't take so long doing the next chapter (I've actually got some things planned for it! :pinkiegasp:)

I was going to do a Che Guevara in Equestria fic, but this looks good.

Great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh no! Not Fluttershy!:applecry:

Great story though, excellently written and I'm enjoying the plot of Celestia being overthrown, keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

Althou story is a little stereotypical, it's overall enjoyable. Writing itself is fine, pacing is fine and plot is interesting.

Oh, by the way. Your cover. Things written on it (concidering russian cyllibals and stuff) is

YAEVOLCTIOI
Shenave the poscheya
Scheaya the poiies

Anyway, keep up the good work!

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That's kind of why I need a new one.

Thanks for the kind words! I plan on re-doing the first chapters so it becomes anything but stereotypical, as the second act is going to be (I hope).

SO far, the characters are interesting, no "filler" and the pacing is good! All I can really say for the first chapter.

Once I read all 10, I will have my full analysis.

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I just remembered something. As soon as I get that cover art from comrade stalin, I plan on adding a prologue chapter.

So, despite my earlier impatience, you may want to wait for that to do a full review.

Still, I appreciate you giving something to hold me over, and I'm glad you liked it so far!

A similar concept to my planned fic...

I shall watch this...

most intently.....

:rainbowwild:

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yes.
YES.
YES!

After so long, a comment for this story! :pinkiehappy:

Not only that, but a positive one, from a name as awesome as "The Commander"

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My good sir I thank you for writing this fic. For it allows me to compare and contrast with my own ideas and helps me immensely.

Second, my positive comment was well earned, since I already read a couple of chapters of this fic and I can honestly say that I like it a lot. (Oh the delightful little revolutionary I am!) *upvote*

Third, thanks about the name:rainbowkiss: (I don't know why I get that so much :rainbowlaugh:)

And now I shall continue to read this so I can give my full thoughts on it once I finish.

I'm 99.9% sure I'v already read this chapter. Did you delete it and re-upload it or something? IS THIS SOME KIND OF CRUEL JOKE?!? :raritycry: :fluttercry:

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I added a prologue.

Sorry if that was misleading, the real chapter WILL be here later this week :raritywink:. It's just I've got two games to work on, a commissioned story of sorts, a seminar to attend, and I got to get ready for Bronycon. But it will be here.

This was just the process of preparing the story for my EQD submission (though I'm glad to know you're excited enough about a new chapter to get this upset)

Now the Elements are theyres :twilightsmile: cant wait for the next chapter

Yeah, I hate that Master plan guy already.

I’d say “hopefully he dies a painful and horrible death”, but I have a feeling he’s gonna be there for a while. :/

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