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Legion222


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Jinx is Piltover's Most Wanted. A dangerous, remorseless, destructive woman to whom "fun" coincides with "explosions" and "body count."

So, of course, she of all people is the one to find a portal to another world.

Equestria is a land of peace and harmony. Crime is practically nonexistent in the land of the ponies, and any major threats to the peace are dealt with by the Elements of Harmony.

So, of course, this is the world Jinx ends up in.

Will Equestria survive a woman whose favorite pastime involves fire and death?
Will Jinx survive a world where the greatest weapon is Friendship?

Only time will tell.

Author's Note:

I'm flying by the seat of my pants with this one. Wish me luck.

Feedback of all kinds is greatly appreciated. :twilightsmile:

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Legion

Cover art is the Jinx splash art, property of Riot Games.

On Hiatus for a total re-write.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 27 )

I saw the title and immediately wanted to read. Unfortunately I'm on break right now and have like five minutes to do so. Will read upon returning home.

In the meantime, I'd just like to say I hope you support my OTP of JinxXFishbones. Or JinxXPow-Pow. Or Pow-PowXFishbones. Really as long as the shooty ones are involved I'm happy.

Anyone else waiting for Discojinx?

I....

I been waiting for this story for quite a while...


:pinkiehappy:

Though, could I be your editor?


(If you need one, that is...)

:rainbowderp:
That... Is a lot of comments. (At least compared to what I'm used to. :twilightsheepish: (Note to self: story about Jinx = lots of comments...))


3680696
Fear not, there will be plenty of Fishbones and Pow-Pow to be had. :twilightsmile: But as I said, I'm flying by the seat of my pants here. I have only a vague outline of what is to come.


3680712
Am I the only one who doesn't know what you're talking about? :rainbowhuh:


3680806
I...

I had no idea this was so highly anticipated.

:pinkiehappy:


3680816
Well, why the hay not?

Write on,
Legion

3681095 Oh.....well basically, I just want Jinx to meet up with Discord, see the chaos that ensues, bother Celestia, etc... You know, good stuff :D

3681775
Ah.

I hadn't considered that...

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Legion

" i have the BEST intentions!"

"awww c'mon, whats the worst that could happen?"

Interesting premise, well written, and I really want to see what happens next. Helloooooo new story! :pinkiehappy:

JINXY JINX JINX my favorite crazy lady. Also good job with the writing it was pretty epic keep up the good work.

Please update

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I've already posted everything that I pre-wrote, so updates will be sporadic and probably pretty slow from here on out. Sorry. :twilightsheepish:

Write on,
Legion

" I'm flying by the seat of my pants with this one" made me laugh a bit more than it should have. I love that saying.


3845806
As do I. :twilightsmile:

Hence why I used it.

Write on,
Legion

Love the story! Keep it up :twilightsmile:

I enjoyed the way this was written. Good grammar and syntax, and only one spelling error:
"but something 'sermed' off to me."
Oh, and that moment when she broke through the fourth wall made my brain freak out for a sec:derpytongue2:.
Keep writing!

That is all. :pinkiecrazy:

(Though, you should really get cover art, a story will always attract more people even with a basic picture.)

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You're right, of course. I guess I've just been holding out hope that this will suddenly become popular and someone will offer to make a custom cover art. :twilightsheepish:

Write on,
Legion

I was expecting more of a reaction from the ponies, but then again the Canterlot elite seem to have their heads stuck so far up their asses that it wouldn't be too surprising for them to just shrug off a human as being beneath them and not worth their time.

Ooh, I wonder what this city would look like on fire?

Jinx... if you hurt Octavia you will die a slow death, here me? You should, since you're breaking the fourth wall. :trixieshiftleft:

It seemed like the armor was protecting them from actual injury, but I was still knocking them out from the force alone.

Eh, while I don't particularly agree with that, especially since Jinx's minigun seems to be a ridiculously high calibre by barrel bore size, I guess it makes a good way of keeping the story from being too dark.

Overall though, pretty good, Jinx can be more eccentric if you ask me though. Oh, and also: update please. :rainbowwild:

4453299 Eh, I don't see anything particularly wrong with just using the actual character background art for Jinx, as it's pretty epic.

na.leagueoflegends.com/sites/default/files/styles/scale_xlarge/public/upload/jinx_splash_0.jpg?itok=9HoIOJWF

4453453
Yeah, I really didn't want to write one of those "Champion arrives in Equestria and kills everything" stories. And the reason I'm taking so long to update is that I'm having a hard time properly capturing Jinx's... Well, Jinx-ness. I might actually have to go for a re-write at some point...

Thanks for the comments!

Write on,
Legion

4453479
Why did I never think of that? :facehoof:

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Legion

4453525 Because you're a silly author? :rainbowwild:


4453493 Yeah, I'd make her more eccentric, after all Jinx is pretty much insane. :derpytongue2:

4677314
Not dead, just really freaking frustrating to write. I dunno what it is about this story, but I can't seem to get anything written for it. I'm considering just putting this thing on Hiatus and doing a full rewrite of the chapters I already have, 'cause nothing else is working for me.

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Legion

I don't mean to be mean or anything but Jinx's home town isn't piltover it's Zaun.:twilightsheepish:

5726466
Huh. You're right, I did put that down wrong in the story. I think what happened is that I wrote this just after Jinx came out, so I just assumed that because she was destroying stuff in Piltover that meant she lived there.

Thanks for catching that. And, you know, for reading, commenting, and favoriting.

Write on,
Legion

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