The name’s Vi. I’m an enforcer. And this is my town - Ponyvile. They call this place the City of Progress - or they did until she showed up.
Her name is Jinx. That’s what they call her, anyway. No one knows who she is, or where she came from. This scrawny pain in the neck shows up one day, firing heavy guns in the air. And laughing – always with the laugh. I can’t stand her.
Everything changed the day she arrived in town. They might as well call it the City of Crime. Panic among the ponies. Chaos in the streets. Mayhem everywhere you look.
The worst part is: none of it makes any sense. Ask her why she’s doing it, and she’ll give you a million different reasons. But the only one that matters is:
She’s having fun.
Ponyvile is just a plaything to her. She’s enjoying the time of her life, and she doesn’t care who gets hurt.
Cover pic used with permission from http://veronica29pl.deviantart.com/
Awesome thanks and thumbs up to the awesome prereader The Great Eater
Description modified from Jinx's League page
Vi and Jinx are both from Riot Games League of Legends
Hehe league.... just call in a malphite or a blitzcrank and you'll be fine.
This... I would like more of it.
3447480
This? you want more of this?
Nah it's all cool, I'm working on the second chapter now
Is Jinx going to kill Derpy?
3511678
nope
maybe
3512629
you and your mind games won't work on me.
3513042
Seriously I have no idea what I'm going to do
3514536
I would have them meet up some where and let them talk it out after a "small" fight. Then resolve some of the issues that vi has against jinx. Then have it become a sort of slice of life / action adventure with explosions and lazers. Maybe through in some other campions. But you know do that you can your of to a great start.
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All in good time however long that is
The next thing I need to decide is how to get jinx to tell Vi
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I'm thinking explosions.
And on how to tell vi I would have jinx straight up yell it in her face because planing is boring and jinx doesn't do boring.
3517618
Hmmmmmm
3447128 Nah, man. Varus all the way.
Please get an editor. You seem to have an interesting premise, but the grammatical errors are distracting.
Pretty fun overall but could use some proof reading