After receiving a strange letter, Torrent Braddock a mechanic who has nothing going for him ends up in Equestria after a storm. Will he ever get home, or get accustomed to this new world?
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This story looks very promising. Keep it up!
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Are you serious?
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Sorry I can't resist, and now I feel bad.
Make more chapters
More pleaze >U<
awesome story keep it up!!!!
I will edit for you if you need, and GOD created humans they didn't come from monkeys and if you think they did then why aren't they evolving today or older from being in captivity for hundreds of years?
3731104 I was referring towards the BC period. (before Christ)
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"GOD created humans. They didn't come from monkeys."
Actually you are right. Humans didn't evolve from monkeys, they have an ancestor in common.
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Also, evolution doesn't happen from day to night. It takes hundreds of thousands of years for some aspects to change and there are a lot of factors to be considered.
By the way, even though I said these words, I am a christian.
3735525 I'm just going off of what I learned, but if you are wanting me to edit the chapter, please, don't hesitate to give me more information.
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Well, that is quite an honor, helping the writer of a story that is so awefull (not to be mistaken with awful).
You can edit it so that he says to Twilight that his species is the only one of the "Homo" gender that is not extinct, maybe. I do not want to bother you, so do what you think is better.
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Awefull because awesome is not aweish enough.
(This comment only exists because I didn't want to be misunderstood).
3735650 For any future chapters or stories that I post will you help me?
If you don't mind, I would be very happy to do so.
3735878 Thank you friend.
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You are welcome.
nice
3731104 Hahahahaha! Ahh heh That just made my day. Surprising how hope can make people stubborn.
3732305 ahhheem god existed before time Jesus was born a lot later
3735525 well why haven't they in the past hundreds of thousands of years?
3735631 I can edit if you need man I'm SOOOOOOO booooooorrrreeeeddddd
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Who said they haven't?
Fossils are a proof of it.
And I do not want to accuse or anything but it sounds like you are trying to shove the fixism theory down everyone's throats. Jesus once told his followers to spread Christianism across the planet, not to impose their beliefs towards other people. One of the most important things he taught was to respect others's opinions. Again, I do not want to accuse you of anything.
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Yes, according to the bible, God existed before time. But what is your point?
3784925 he said it was bc before Christ but god was around before then before time that's my point.
3784910 no I'm not trying to shove it down your throughts but you need to know that scientist created the Big Bang and vertical evolution theories because they don't wanna accept that god created EVERYTHING!!!!!!
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Actually, those theories, apart from not being totally accurate, were created because there was a lot of research and studies so that they could be born. This is not some theory that makes no sense whatsoever, like the idea that aliens kidnapped dinosaurs. And Darwin was proven to be right by latter scientists who saw his writings.
And scientists do not want to accept God?
I disagree. There exist a lot of Christian scientists who contribute to the science world with their intelligence by making huge discoveries but remain attached to their beliefs and ideals. They can conciliate both science and christianism.
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Son, you went full retard.
Never go full retard.
I'm a Christian proponent of evolution and I gladly spread the word of God and science. It takes a lot of stupid to believe they are mutually exclusive.
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I am now pretty confident that you are trolling.
a good starting chapter
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Excuse me, but what do you mean by "Christian proponent of evolution"?
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I'm a Christian and I push for evolution to be taught in schools and churches.
There is no 'science vs religion' there is only truth and people trying to the best of their abilities to unravel it.
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I agree with you! Thank you for the explanation.
a good chapter
3814772 I AM NOT FUCKING TROLLING!!!!!
3786190 yes I agree there were a lot of christian scientists, but many of them now refuse Christ!
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Very unlikely, why would they do that?
3916334 Because they don't! I'm sure they have some lame excuse but they don't accept anymore
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You: ...many of them now refuse Christ.
Me: Unlikely, why?
You: Because they don't.
Now what the heck was that kind of answer? And you can't accurately say that they don't anymore.
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Okay, I guess I will just have to come to terms with that fact that there are people still out there that are really this stupid.
3916373 I'm confused I took a 50 problem math test it's 12 at night IM TIRED
3916949 Are you insulting me or seldom scientists I can't tell I'm tired and drunk.
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Then take a breath before writing anything if you are not in a normal state, it helps a lot. And what are "seldom scientists"?
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seldom = some, very few.
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Don't blame me for that. English was not my first language to be learned, so there are a few words I have to learn yet.
3944419 I'm not, it's fine.
The wait was worth it! Great chapter!
This seems like a great chapter. BTW, when Rarity and Twilight became red after seeing Torrent without a robe does that mean that they find him attractive?