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khandmlpfan


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Based on "My Overbearing Aunt" by Sketchy Unicorn; Not all transfers between Equestria and Earth were good ones, but one of the 'upper crusts' makes one certain 'bad transfer', into a new beginning.

Follow the story of James, as he is brought up within Canterlot by one of the upper-crusts of society. Once abandoned as a infant on one of the shuttles to Equestria from the Human world, being found by a strange stallion then brought to a family willing to take him and raise as their own.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

Question; will there be romance? :derpytongue2:

Ok a interesting start, not what I was expecting but still a good start. Though I do ask that his real parents make an appearance, just for a bit of conflict. Also you may want to take a look at some of the words, you've got wrong words in places: last paragraph, second sentience...

ask form Celestia

should be: Ask for Celestia

Comment posted by Uberdeathninja deleted Jan 1st, 2014

I would read this and I hope it doesn't go down hill like some stuff does cause this sounds good

Great so far I shall wait for more

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: this is so exciting!!!!!!

btw i think u spelled prologue wrong :moustache::moustache: :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Why isn't Ditzy, I mean Derpy, in the tags?

Comment posted by khandmlpfan deleted Jan 15th, 2014

3788220 This is one of those stories where there are too many to list, so all the other characters, not related to my oc James are listed under 'other'. There are many other stories with similar situations.

Noticed a typo or two, listed below. Aside form that and the slow pacing, I'm still interested

"Dear, Celestia, why didn't I check the time when i left!?"

You forgot to capitalize the second I, and I'm not sure the first comma is supposed to be there.

3789830 Thanks for telling me this, I did not see it my first time around.

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