• Member Since 10th Oct, 2012
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TheExhaustedBrony


I wish I could just finish all the half-done stories I've got backlogged.

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It's been ten years since Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle escaped Ponyville. They were taken to Canterlot where the remnants of ponykind were sheltered. Two years later, the last known plagued pony was destroyed and Equestria was declared as a safe zone. Of course, defenses are on high alert at all times, just in case of the unlikely event that an infected pony surfaces.

Despite living in a city with several reasons to not be afraid, Apple Bloom can't help but fear the worst that is about to befall Equestria once again.

**Title is subject to change**

This is a sequel to my pride and joy, The Last Stand, the chapters will be much longer and I hope that this story will have the same effect the last one did.

I'm also going to need a cover...

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

It's here.

Not to shabby. Aside from a few missing punctuation marks and the tense-change at the end, this was pretty good.

3465631 Those tense changes are the worst, eh? :moustache:

3465642 They're not as bad as word misusage.

3465642 I hate tense changes... They get me every time...:flutterrage:

This sounds like 28 weeks later.

3465914 I admit that the movie was used as a reference to get this story started, and I hope it doesn't make you not like the story I'm writing.

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Nah thats cool, I liked the movie and I am still going to read it, also if you are still reading Yadith, then there is a new chapter coming out soon.

And the second chapter is here! Huzzah! *dives in to read it*:yay:

And let me just say that I'm just soooooo glad that you decided to continue this, bro. It had a great start, and I, for one, am anxious to see what happens to Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and the rest of the survivors.:ajsmug::twilightsmile:

Bring it on!:rainbowdetermined2:

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