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TheExhaustedBrony


I wish I could just finish all the half-done stories I've got backlogged.

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As much as I hate the "zompony apocalypse" idea (it just seems like there;s so many things, especially in Equestria, that would either prevent or very quickly stop it), this is an interesting take on it, so far at least. You have my interest.

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Thanks!:pinkiehappy:
I totally know what you mean, I tried to avoid the slaughterhouse in this fic, if you know what I mean.

Well. I was going to point out a few grammatical errors for you to fix, but now I see that there are more of them than I care to list. Please do yourself a favor and get an editor. :scootangel:

Also, dem zombehs. I like dem zombehs.

Awesome....Best take on a zombie in equestria story Ive seen. Also "The Last Stand?" I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

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Yea, I know that my grammar isn't exactly... good. Thanks for liking the story though. :pinkiehappy:

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It was far from being unreadable, so I'll give you credit for that one. Also, being the zombie junkie that I am, of course I'm going to at least give it an initial read-through. And I do like where you're going with this, especially how you seem to combine hope with hopelessness while diminishing neither. (The former coming when Sweetie Belle joins them, the latter when she reveals Rarity's distress.) So you do have something good going with this.

I would read it, but I must put it on the mountain of read-later for now. Pretty busy. Looks interesting though.

1731952I know how you feel, bro. It's better to have more suspense and drama, rather than just blood and guts every chapter:derpytongue2:

I have a feeling this will be a short fic. One that won't end too well, given you don't pull a Deus Ex Machina somewhere along the way :trixieshiftright:

Will watch.

I've never read an apocalyptic zombie MLP fic before, hope this one lives to see a bright and bloody future. :scootangel:

Cuz y'all love this so much, I'm saying FUCK YOU HOMEWORK! I'm writing more!

http://imgur.com/aEKUP
It's just too important!

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they're actually rather common on this site. you just have to know where to look.

Zombies I guess. BUT WHY DOES RARITY HAVE TO GET BIT FIRST:raritydespair::raritycry:

Sooo... whoever didn't like this fic before, suddenly likes it now?:pinkiehappy:

Holy mother of BUCK, that was an awesome chapter, short, but still note worthy. :scootangel:

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I like writing short chapters, firstly, it leaves room for more because I don't explain EVERYTHING right away

Second, I think of ideas as they come, most of what you read in my stuff comes to me in the moment.

You made a successful zombie story. Holy wow. That is hard to do. I thought me and a few others were the only ones.

Great job!

1742347 Thank you very much!:pinkiehappy: It means a lot to me knowing that people like my work. I suppose I'm part of those proud few now.

You actually managed to message me before I could finish my review, so I just forgot a good deal of what I wanted to say.

1744099 To put it bluntly, my idea is that she's gone FUCKING NUTS, even by Pinkie Pie standards.

It was a good chapter, although I would say you should add a little more longterm damage from Rarity's death on Applejack in order to maintain realism, but overall not a bad piece.

also, yay for pinkie pie and zombie cake :pinkiecrazy:

1744785 I finished that chapter at like 4 or 5 AM, I'm not even sure anymore cuz I didn't sleep. I apologize that I didn't really go deeper than I know I should have. Fear not, I have many ideas for future chapters already planned out to make up for it :D

So far I`m enjoying this story,
Keep up the good work
It will give it my like, fav, and I will be expecting more :twilightsmile:

1746790 Oh and if you truly want more, don't forget to keep your eye on me.:ajsmug:

Shit is about to go DOWN:fluttershbad:

Well'p I figure Pinkie will kill at least half of the zombies in ponyville before she gets overwhelmed.

I suspected this to happen, I hope she died, even though it makes me sound like a total dick, great chapter by the way!!! :scootangel:

FRIGGIN' AWESOME.

I just read all the chapters. Amazingness.
:rainbowwild: :raritystarry: :ajsmug: :derpyderp1: :derpyderp2: :pinkiesmile: :rainbowderp: :raritywink: :rainbowdetermined2: :twilightoops: :yay: :moustache:

You have all the win. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

My Holy Dear Celestia...

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Continue when you wish.

((AKA, MOOOORRRREEEE.:flutterrage:))

I'm going to guess that you pulled the same thing that happened to the attic kid in episode five of the Walking Dead video game.

1811555 Heh, yea. I'll admit it. It's just that it was so profound. Y'know?

1811563 Tell me about it, it was just heart wrenching what happened to the kid. And at the same time it was kinds pathetic at how the zombie was still trying to reach for you but in couldn't even move. I'm guessing that it's Scootaloo that's in the attic. By the way, does the zombie virus in the story work like the Walking Dead virus, or do you still have to get bitten?

1811608 I've decided to keep it restricted to the bite. R.I.P. Kenny and the rest of his family.

I. . . I-I need to go and cry for a bit. . . :fluttercry:

Damn.
Some serious shit going on in this story.
I like it.

1812745 Thanks, this is exactly what I was aiming at. I wanted to deal with the serious and emotional side of the apocalypse.

Something tells me that Fluttershy might be worse....

also, daymn Scoots, you dead.

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