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Years in the future is threatened, all is so much worst. The Mane 6 are dead and there seems to be no chance of living for the future. Demons threaten the world and it is all because of one mare. She suffers slight amnesia, but she remembers her betrayal, and some of what has happened to her, but there is one thing that is lost in her mind, her name.
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Well... It was worth reading,
I enjoyed this chapter as much as the last ones. Bit of storytelling, bit of action, this is why I like this fanfic
3332108 Well if you mean Chapter 3 I wanted to add some more history and story to Broken, make him kind of become more interesting. With Shadow, she can't really have much past reference of course because of the fact she has slight amnesia. Anyways thanks.
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Well, an amnesia is a bit cliche, but despite that a very good way to slow down the storytelling. I even once tried to make a story of a character who gets his amnesia in Chapter II, it ended up horrible :/
3336015 Oh hey, never replied, sorry, I think I tried the Internet glitched.
I will admit very true, but I never had told a story with someone with amnesia and I like to try new things. However there are thing I will probably avoid doing that I see too much as it is on RPs is blindness unless if a character gets a cut in the eye or something, mute, and deaf. Like blindness if they get injured in the eyes, I am fine with, but on Warriors RPs I find that it is way too common.
One I would love to use in the future is may anosmia which is the inability to small.