Young Mavis has always hated the social life of school. Too many ponies treat her like dirt for being smart and nerdy. Sometimes she needs to escape the social trap and go to her quiet place. A special tree away from Manehatten that peers over the city, but what happens when her somepony follows her there.
I think the word you were looking for is "peers" (over the city), unless it's a pear tree. A very big pear tree.
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Oh kk, I will fix, thanks
Nicely done
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Thanks, I don't do many short stories.