Equestria, once a peaceful land living in harmony. That was until the disappearance of the two royal sisters, which lead to the dividing of Equestria and the dividing of the Elements. Here in this story is a collection of tales, spotlighting one of the six factions troops.
Update: The site containing all the Equestria divided info is gone. Use Google search if you want to see the house forces.
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Love the world of Equestria Divided and I enjoyed reading this so far. Can't wait for more so here's a moustache for motivation.
I honestly expected Shallow Stone to be the colt from the dream, I did not see that coming.
Who's next I wonder?
Battles are always fun, for me at least. Have you considered posting this story to a group?
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Not really sure how to, man.
3253628 It's easy, just click the ''Groups'' tab and then use the search function to find a group you like, I think there is one for Equestria Divided. Then click the ''join'' button to join.
If you want to submit a fic to a group you need to be a member first, then you pick the appropriate folder for your story and use the ''add story'' button to add it.
Quick, efficient and unstoppable, you have done a good job at capturing the essence of a Juggernaught.
Will any feature prominent MLP characters?
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Maybe, I'm just basically winging it when writing these chapters. So who knows?
3258380 These are still awesome short stories.
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Thanks
3258541 Your welcome
RVB reference for the win!
This may be nitpicking but there were a few grammatical errors that I picked up on.
lost should read as lose, the comma should also be after 'home' as it helps it flow better.
E.G: Not only did Thunderlane lose his home, but also his little brother.
Should read as outraged.
Overall though it reads as well as the other chapters.
I will say that i liked the Red Vs Blue reference but i feel that the lack of blues cut some of the references unless your next chapter has them in it. Which would be cool. And i would think that Church or the pony him would be in Rarity's army as a "markspony".
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Interesting idea, I might consider it.
You know I'm surprised none of the ponies who fight the forest think of the easiest option which is this. Clear the clouds around it so it dries up for a while then air bomb it with fire bombs while you burn the perimeter. Slowly working in as the fire is burned out. using the winds so that the smoke, ashes, and embers and blown towards the center of the forest.
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Who knows, I'm no military tactician.
So question have any of the artillery comanders figured out how to make burst shot? (A cannon shot that explodes when a fuse burns to powder in the center) And if they have i wonder why there not loading them into mortars to use as anti pegasi weapons as bursting cannon balls and said shrapnel would rip the wings off pegasi so much easier and render there ability to fly useless.
This really creepy. Then again the Cult isn't exactly Sunshine and Rainbows.
I like the diary format of this chapter as well as the brutality of the Inquisition. It's interesting to see that not everyone in Moon and Star agree's with the Inquitions ''methods''.
I enjoyed it as it exemplified the idea that mercenaries are only loyal to coin. But that said the characters were still likeable and I enjoyed the idea that the dogs 'hostage' was really his lover.
Interesting idea for the zebra mark. but it makes sense they technically aren't ponies and therefore would not get cutie marks, at least in the same way.
Necromancy is a real problem.
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Viking ponies FTW!
Battlefield romance. Awwwwww.
I like stories like this as we follow an individual and see how his choices affect his life and the lives of those around him.
Nice to see the inner thoughts and regrets of Blossomforth.
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Thanks man, you been a huge support for me.
3408305 no problem. I am thoroughly enjoying these stories and like to let it be known.
Nice short stories, but they are severely hampered by the many typos regarding tenses, punctuation, grammar, .... You should really look for a proofreader.
Intense and scary chapter, loved it.
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On another note, reference the above comment, would you like me to proofread for you? I am enjoying these stories and would be happy to help you out if you would like.
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Sure man, but how exactly?
3443618 I could always read the chapter after posting and then PM you my suggestions.
Alternatively we could always use Google Docs. that could allow for a pre-post proofread.
What works for you?
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I think I may just send you the story, through this site's mail. I'll just sent it to you and the subject would be Proofreading.
3443883 Sounds good. It'll be easier for me to get back to you with my suggestions.
Looking forward to working with you.
Thanks for the mention. Glad I could help.
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Your welcome.
Don't worry about a lack of updates too much. Life just gets in the way sometimes, much like with myself.
Still enjoying this fiction.
Nice to see a new chapter.
Happy New Year to ya!
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Kinda late for Happy New Years, but right back at ya buddy.
I love how each one of these have it's own unique story. Keep'em coming these are great!
This was perfect for the EQ Divided Rarity. A deception and treachery years in the making.
Short, sweet and to the point. No more was needed.
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Thanks.
This is good. Why isn't this more popular?
3834154 I have no idea.
Sometimes other things just have to take priority. Still enjoyed this latest instalment.
The individual stories make these more interesting
Don't want to run into these two on a dark night.
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My sentiments exactly
Flash went with Whitegold?
At least you didn't kill him like some authors probably would, I just dont get the hate that guy attracts.