*Set in the Equestria Divided universe created by PoorYorickDA*
Nighthooves under the service of House Whitegold found a diary in the aftermath of a Zebra and Everfree incursion against an Earthborn outpost near the southern edge of the Everfree Forest. While it was determined that the diary held little information of value to the House, the pony who discovered it found its contents interesting.
Said contents are detailed below.
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Good chapter and promising story there. I like the "no good or bad side" ambience. Keep up the good work.
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It's good to know I did something right.
I like this. It's depressing, somber, and kind of makes me angry. Well done and in perfect tune to the world.
I liked your style of writing here. It was of very good quality, and maintained a good atmosphere and sense of action.
I will definately look through to see if you've written anything else.
I don't think I've read any Equestria Divided story that truly felt as much like like a war story full of gray morality as this one. Great work getting into the head of a soldier who "fired the first shot."