Rainbow Dash is the last Bearer of Harmony left. She's dying in a hospital bed. Tank sits by her side. These are her last words to her loyal pet and friend.
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Wow, thats alot.
Twilight Sparkle is an Alicorn.
Please post a Sequel explaining what happened?
This will drive me to insanity, literally.
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Well what are your questions about it and I might write something bout it.
Nurse: How would he kill me? Seriously.
Doctor: Slowly. Painfully. But above all, very, very slowly.
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It's funny because he's a tortoise!
Seriously
You shoot the tortoise, you don't you magic to sedate him or try to reason you just shoot him
Excuse me while I go bang my head against a wall since I can't face palm myself hard enough.
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I agree, the gun thing killed what could've been something beautiful in its tragedy, like say, they use magic, which is more plausible. It turns into a fight, the doc tries to reason with Tank only for him to charge them in a fit of sadness and rage, giving them no choice.
I think you should combine the chapters into one.
Not a bad read but really quick
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The next chapter was fluff to make it longer so I could publish it. My plan was to erase it and only have the first one, but they're watching so I had to have the second chapter. I agree shooting him was stupid I plan to change it...
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There fixed more to my liking.
3169097 That's much better I still don't think that need to shoot at him though.
This fanfiction was incredible. Sad, but unbelievable awesome.
So....sad.........
*thumbs up*
You sir gave me the most feels I have ever had reading a story. I quite literally shed a tear at the very end.
I still read this occasionaly and i cry every time.
Thank you for reminding me I can still cry. Bucking amazing.
So... Sad!
)
(In a good way
I don't see anything wrong with this story I don't mind the shooting part and the ending was just so cute. I like how short it was. It doesnt drag on.
I know it's 2015, but
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It is very rare for a story to cause me to tear up but this one did so. Poor Tank, being without Rainbow for who knows how long.