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Melakai Symphonia


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One could say that Ponyville is a sanctuary. Another could say that Ponyville is a place for discovering one’s hopes and dreams. Scootaloo was a young Pegasus, beautiful and unique in her own ways. She had no Mother or Father to help her along. Her friends were always there for her, but her depression often outweighed their efforts. Her nights were spent alone with no pony to comfort her. Happiness was only found when she thought of her one dream coming true, to fly as high as the sky would let her. She wanted nothing more than to be like her hero, Rainbow Dash. It was a dream that could not be made a reality however.

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Comments ( 30 )

All the feels!!! :pinkiesad2::applecry::fluttercry::unsuresweetie: Why isnt this featured???

I told you this would do well man. Nice job. Six likes and not a single dislike. :coolphoto:

2270240 Thanks :pinkiehappy: I tried haha. Im glad that you liked it!

2270521 I owe it to your patience with my working haha

i was not prepared for the feels

2272619 Thanks for taking the time to read it :pinkiehappy: I am glad that I able to elicit some emotions XD

:scootangel: I was not able to Handel the feels man.

Great story. Dem feels. :pinkiesad2:

Wow. You blew me away with this one, Melakai. Such a sad story, but so well written. I've read sad stories before where the writing or phrasing let the story down and didn't convey the sadness as well as it could. I'm pleased to say that this is NOT one of those stories, you wrote it perfectly. You made me cry, and only one other story I've read ever managed to do that. You are a skilled heartbreaker, Melakai.

I can't stress enough how much i love this fanfiction, despite how sad it's made me feel. :raritydespair::raritycry:

2283123 Thank you! It means a lot to know that I did a good job ^_^ Thanks for reading!

2284689 Thanks a ton man. I really appreciate you reading it. I shall continue my progress toward becoming a great writer ^_^

2283711 Thanks :D I am glad that you liked it!

2285320 No problem. It was, as with everything you've written, a pleasure reading it. Keep on writing, Melakai, you're going places.

2288510 Thanks a ton man. I will make sure to keep progressing :coolphoto:

This is one of the only stories that can turn me into a shriveling mess, So hats off to you!:scootangel:

2327387 Thanks! I am glad that you liked it :pinkiesmile:

I would have been like :raritycry::raritydespair:

but after 2g1c and cupcakes I'm completely desensitized.

Cool story bro.

dem feels

2371951 Thanks! ^_^ Yeah, that video and story are both mortifying XD

Nice short story, hits ya straight in the feels

Don't like but can't help to like. it so sad :fluttercry::fluttershbad::applecry::raritycry:

You got me in tears.

3649228 Thanks, I am glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

4059209 Thanks for your response ^_^ I am glad that it made you feel feels lol

Nice story man. Them feels got to me, haha. Love the Last two lines btw

Wow, great job. I almost cried, but not quite (That's a hard thing to do).
One thing that came to mind while I was reading was that the situation came up so fast. I think that if the story took a little more time to develop in the beginning there would be a greater emotional response. I liked the note the best, I think you did a great job writing it.

4789338 Thanks! And yeah, I was rushing in this one. I had a lot of stuff to catch up with at the time.

This made me cry:(

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