• Member Since 19th Jan, 2012
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The Rainbow Blunderbolt


"If there's one thing I will not tolerate, it's violence." "Then why are you hitting me?" "Right, make that two things. Violence, and stupid questions."

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Two stabs were all it took for Equestria's best young flyer to fall.

She was all alone that night, nothing seemed out of the ordinary, but then it happened.

Cover image is not mine, that belongs to whoever it belongs to.

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that was amazing

I saw the title and was like :rainbowhuh:, then I was like :fluttershysad: now I'm like :fluttercry:

What.
This was slightly disconcerting, but that's not really a big deal, I caught on. What a big deal is is there doesn't seem to be a backstory. Who the fuck is this guy? A serial killer who feels bad about himself? An insane fan who thought she fucked up? A near-innocent man who was commissioned to kill her for the sake of the country? This level of misunderstanding made the entire story unenjoyable, no matter how great it was written.

oh god, that was amazing, i usually cry when RD dies...but for some strange reason, i didnt :rainbowhuh: i dunno, maybe i just was soamazed and to struck at the thought of that ever happening to her, may celestia guide her day and luna protect her night *bows head*

1118136 Yeah...I have no idea either. Maybe I'll write a back story, but maybe not. Let's just say he's a serial killer. :derpytongue2:

But, thank you for your comment!

1118093 Thank you!

1118099 Aww, I'm sorry I made you sad.:twilightsheepish: Thank you for commenting!

1118180 Thank you very much!

1118180
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That's a fucking amazing username.

Doctor Whooves the assassin? :rainbowhuh:

1120122

thanks! i thought it was retty cool to :rainbowkiss:

Oh god :fluttercry:

That was so good. Take all of my feels.
Also, I agree with Firefeather, I would love to see you continue this, or just explain it a little more I guess.
But I doubt you will, you released it a while ago so I bet you won't even see this comment. Oh well, it was worth a shot. :moustache:

this was amazing. sad. but amazing. also. why did the killer cry? why was the killer a killer?

The feels...I'm in physical pain here. :raritycry:

My emotions changed from :applejackunsure: to :twilightoops: to :raritydespair: to :fluttercry: to :pinkiesad2:

Well, there go my feels. :raritycry:

My favorite pony.....why? Why? And what exactly lead to this? :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: is my response. Please explain this to me. Because right now it sounds like she was crucified.

So sad right on the feels:fluttercry:

Woops! Forgot to favorite this great story when I first read it.

Fixed. :twilightsmile:

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