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I'm so happy to see this story updated! We're really looking forward to the next installment!
This fic needs far more likes than it has.
highway to the mare-zone (hmm no rainbowdash with aviators smily)
WhoaWaitWhat
Is that who I think it is...?
Add a 'from'
Either add 'found' in the indicated spot, or switch 'myself' with 'trapped'
Replace 'them' with 'their'
Add 'that'
So, how are you planning on using Phoenix without contradicting TLaTU? Are we just assuming that, after the final AA game, he makes a permanent move to Equestria?
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All fixes made, thanks.
This takes place in an entirely different verse from TLaTU, so the events of the latter do not happen here. This means I can tell a new story involving him that may hearken to TLaTU in some ways but doesn't contradict it. The Phoenixverse and the G4Mverse are two separate AUs, though you may find some surprising parallels between them as well. The events of Rise of Firefly, for example, is common to both.
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Thank you! Only two more installments left at this point...
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In my not-so-humble opinion, it's never gotten its due and probably never will. I expect it'll hit 300 likes someday, at least.
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"Headin' into twilight, Spreadin' out her wings tonight" does take on new meaning here!
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In that case, what place in the games' cannon is this taking place?
I really don't understand how no one in universe seems to figure this out instantly given that her disguise is so blindingly obvious. There's not a single journalist out there who can solve the easy mystery despite people having discovered identities that were far more concealed? No human thinks "hey she looks a lot like that Princess Cadance person" (having the same build, coat colour, clothes obviously hiding wings, and a wig which doesn't completely hide her mane which shock has the same colours as Cadance's)? Given that you imagine they probably would have read up on the basics of who are important people in the world they're now in?
No one ever puts 2-and-2 together and figures out that Platinum has the princess' ear but they are never seen together and when one vanishes the other appears?
In the original stories, Harry has so many clues that he'd have to be completely stupid not to grasp them.
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I could tell you, but that will spoil the surprise. All I'll say for now is that it happens at an appropriate point in his story, and you'll be able to tell pretty quickly what point that is. Hell, that alone might give it away.
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Will he at least retain his legal license? Will there be any chance of him being called on for his other services?
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Please note, we're just assuming she is Cadance; we don't actually know 100% that's the case. I've given her a Saddle Arabian identity just in case DEL has been trolling us all this time. Either way, I'm covered--she's either Saddle Arabian, or simply Cadance's cover. Keep in mind that Five Stars was introduced to her a full year after she last saw Cadance, and she had a convincing cover story, being of Saddle Arabian size and dress while even working out of the Saddle Arabian embassy. Five Stars had no reason to suspect anything differently, though it wouldn't surprise me if she knows the truth and just plays along. If I'm feeling particularly frisky, I may try to address the question in the Q&A session.
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The question has been considered. That's all I will say for now.
Comfy! Though we southerners have been having an almost non-winter this year. This is the warmest winter I've ever encountered in my life.
Another one of antifa's favorite tricks. Note to antifa; this trick only works once. Your enemies will come out of the shadows to haunt you one day, scum. To the news people who encourage violence against so-called neo-nazis like Richard Spencer, you too will pay the price for destroying civil discourse in our nation.
We gave them nachos, they gave us sour cream!
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Hey, it's that mare from chapter two that got hentai'd by her plants! Been wondering what that gal's been up to...
Sounds like a good omen to me!
Aww! What a cute name for a mare.
Double entry? Pffff! Double Entry!? They've got a trainer named Double Entry. The jokes just write themselves.
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But enough about their assets, let's talk about yours!
Double Entry would bring up taking on extra duties, wouldn't she? Hehehehehehe...
He wouldn't... (What am I saying? Of course he would...)
Spoken like best trainer!
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Sure, it's DEL's story concept after all, but all the things I mentioned are listed in his stories, and that quote from yours was just to allow me to make a general comment without causing confusion on what I was talking about. In the original story Harry notes her appearance (which the reader will observe is Cadance-esque), and it's even down commented on how Cadance knows enough about him to speak on his behalf when he's supposedly never met her. As an author yourself, you'll also no doubt appreciate that good writing keeps things relevant. So if all the many many hints were all BS just to be able to say "GOT YOU LOL" then that would be shit writing, particularly since there's no way of testing a claim or doing research, unlike the real world.
If it's not Cadance, it's awful writing. If it is, it is an element of weak writing; how is it a mystery in universe given how Harry manages to get so many hints (even if he can't figure them out because he's clueless)?
Personally I like to pretend it's an open secret and almost everyone thinks it's Cadance being cute. While Harry remains as oblivious as ever. Though it would be hilarious if there was a story where a prospective Gentleman gets interviewed by her and immediately asks why Cadance is badly disguising herself.
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Random setting speculation: At the latest, it needs to happen before Bridge to the Turnabout. Dahlia needs to still be an open wound, which means no Iris. He'll also have to be at a low point in his life. I'm thinking just after Farewell My Turnabout, as that when he'll be most open to questioning everything he currently believes.
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By my count, we had about ten days of winter here, including one decent storm and two separate cold snaps. Aside from that, it's been an endless roller coaster of a couple 'normal' temperature days followed by several days in the 60s and 70s and then back. Over and over and over. I don't think we'll see any more cold weather or snow at this point even though February's dealt us body blows each of the past three years here. Not the warmest winter I've seen here, though. One four or five years ago had that honor where it was warm throughout and we had only one day where the high temperature never got out of the 30s.
Shut up, they said, and increasingly resort to violence and threats of it to get what they want. Word of warning, folks. You can only push people like this so far. Sooner or later, they will fight back. Keep resorting to fascist tactics in your so-called anti-fascist fight, and people will increasingly and properly see you as the real brownshirts here. And when that happens... heaven help you.
"That image is shit!" And been far too long since that joke has been made!
Posting on anonymous support groups about her experience and striking up a secret friendship with Daisy for it? "Welcome to True Tentacle Trysts and you! So who would like to go first?" "I'm morning Glow, and I got rutted by my plants when Discord took power and liked it..." "Wow! I'm Daisy and so did I..."
You have to admit, when you have no nudity taboos but the other culture does, that makes it ridiculously easy for them to tease...
Fun fact: when I initially wrote that sentence, I accidentally typed in 'batmare'. That would have made this a far different story...
It's actually an accounting term I learned about! I didn't even think about the double-entendre until you mentioned it!
She's an accountant. She has them all listed in exacting detail in a ledger! And reminds you that she needs frequent deposits to maintain her overall balance...
You're enjoying this way too much!
That's our filly! Knows who she is and will never apologize for it. And you'll soon see, she can even stand up to the withering gaze and logic of the one called The Attorney. Oh, I have such plans now...
I see a few have got the hints or clues you have left they are vary easy for me (ok I am a bit on the old side) so I remember the movie you referred to.
but first the story it also easy as it is your story. The Lawyer and The Unicorn
the movie.
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yes ! also needs more beach volleyball and ... all the other top gun stuff hehehe
It's almost disheartening to think this will be but a memory soon.
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You could always poke Rapto, or DEL to get their stuff moving
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What if its a mirror pool copy? Is it really Cadance then? IS IT!?!
My reaction to it was a chuckle and facepalm.
Or she could be acting as a proxy for Cadence which later replaces her.
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Welcome, then! Hope you enjoy. Be sure you also read the parent story in the Gentlemanverse as well, if you haven't already: the original Gentleman for Mares. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60371/gentleman-for-mares. That's where Five Stars first appears in a minor role that had a major impact.
Hah! So that wasn't just something that Wingman happened to bumble into when he came over; the mare was likely doing it on purpose to him for giggles. Wonderful callback, Firesight!
Phoenix Wright?
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Phoenix Wright.
Oh! So now we're gonna see you-know-who! I was wondering when he'd show up. If I have to guess, he the "pianist" in this story.
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Then you guess incorrectly. Though you're at least correct on the time frame. Hope you enjoy!