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Damn you for making me wait this long, and double damn you for having stories that I'll have to favorite once they come out as well!
Being serious now, thank you. I've got nothing else to say about this wonderful story right now.
Double word.
Missing a was? Unclear.
The first time I needed?
With that out of the way, Queen Molyneux's address was pretty epic amirite!? And holy crap what is this about a sequel? I can't wait!
Yeahhhh!! The re will be a sequel, thats some wonderfull news :D, i'll read it for sure, as well as The side story, thanks for the chapter man, and good luck.
Could you show us the letter Celestia wrote? I would like to see her thoughts on the whole thing.
Good work thusfar, still as enjoyable as when I started reading it.
Very enjoyable chapter, despite it being almost as dark and shocking as the chapters taking place in Las Pegasus. My heart nearly broke after reading about Sweat Tea's ordeal. I can only hope she eventually has a happy ending. Who know's, maybe she'll take a cue from Five Stars and find herself a nice, loving human. The side notes describing current events regarding the censorship and harassment of G4Ms are also really nice touches that expand the story and the world that it's set in.
I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment.
blueblood ? (stallion who can't handel mares xDD)
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No, I don't think there is anything wrong here.
"He denies [that] he asked that mutual friend to do it, but he's fooling nopony."
The implied "[that]", like many words in casual language, is often omitted. For example:
"I thought you said you mowed the lawn already?" is a colloquial form of "I thought you said that you had mowed the lawn already?"
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Nothing else I can say except thanks.
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All edits made, thanks. Still amazes me how I miss stuff like that.
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If I do, it can't be here because it wouldn't make sense for Five Stars to share such a letter publicly. Perhaps in the side story.
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Sweet Tea's ordeal, sadly, is somewhat based on personal experience. I've had the experience of letting myself be pressured into doing something sorely regretted and that's about how I felt afterwards. I don't know her eventual fate yet, but Five Stars will undoubtedly tell me in due time.
Glad to know you're enjoying the side notes as well. Those have taken on a life of their own I never meant at the start, but I'm going with it. It's enriching the story and opening up new avenues to explore, so why stop now?
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No spoilers.
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I corrected it already, so it would be right now. Before, the word 'asked' was repeated twice--definitely a mistake.
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Share it to us not the in universe readers. They don't have to know what she wrote.
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Helps that everything tied in nicely here...I can even hazard a decent guess which disgruntled mare is implied at the start...since he really screwed up not telling her his job at the start
Do I detect a tie-in with Feathered Heart?
5084091 Oh I got plenty of experience picking embarrassing typos and suchlike out of my own story and I'm told it still looks like crap due to the bad grammar. You're light-years ahead of me.
5083713 That is without a single doubt, the most distracting man-chest I have ever seen. I swear every time you post something, I'm like whoa! That dude is shinin' and glistenin'!
This doesn't really follow from anything you said, but yet somehow it felt necessary to say. I hope today finds you well.
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Yeah, my avatar is pretty sexy, isn't it? He's the badass Archer from the excellent classic visual novel Fate/stay night.
......Oh my, could this possibly be a 2078×2092 pixel version of my avatar picture? Why yes, I do believe that it is!
———Enjoy.
Always happy to see this story get an update. Thanks for all of your hard work!
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Indeed you do. Feathered Heart is my favorite in-progress story. I'd love to write something in that setting as well.
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All I can say to that picture is... *slurp*
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Thanks! Here's hoping I can maintain the same high standards all the way through...
Spoooileeers~
That story isn't even done yet. ^^
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I think it's fairly certain that the story doesn't end with Gilda dead and the Gryphons defeated.
5091483 really do love feathered heart. Makes me sad that DEL can't be a full time author.
Talk about mobilization. Seems like nobody except for the HERD insurgents are gonna need or want PMC protection after this issue unless something blows up bad. HERD is lucky Interpol hasn't taken charge of the investigation if they're given jurisdiction within Equestrian borders.
Aces Up and Double Down have come out of the top of my shitlist too, although I still have the opinion that they didn't make it up to Five Stars in a way that we the eldritch story readers have truly been shown for approval and so don't deserve more than clinical acknowledgement. A short account of a good deed by a third party does not make for full atonement.
Also, heh, Molyneux. Thankfully this Equestria won't have to be jumped to a barren planet after a brutal joint invasion of non-ponies following right after an extended and crippling embargo.
Sea Swirl, calling it now.
Called it
Feathered Heart spoilers?
Two things... well three. But two related to the chapter content.
Sea Swirl is a bitch!
And...
Shame the courts in REAL LIFE can't learn from this because it's true. people get "offended" over something and all the sudden that offending topic is taboo? Buck that noise. Grow a pair and deal with it.
In what way did human helped the grippons?
Was there a war in where we helped them?
Juniper should be shot. There's your opening statement.
Perhaps one day we'll fight side by side again?
15 years for assaulting a male? Damn, we need that in the U.S. so they'll stop assaulting us! You get assaulted by a female in the U.S. as a man, you're immediately shamed and blamed for pushing the woman to do it!
Shipwreck Kelly would approve! (google it, I'm lazy.)
Build the wall, make the changelings pay for it! In all seriousness, I'm not sure how I'd feel about banging a shapeshifted changeling...
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That shit never gets old!
Juniper is basically the Germany of sex. She never should have gotten this far, but rest assured, she'll lose everything by the time it's all over.
If I was Five Stars, I'd have beat the ever-loving crap out of her. Seriously, what a complete piece of trash. Do I even need to explain why she should be banished to the sun? Ugh!
Personally, I don't see the value in giving the mare with a broken "no" button the final say so. She doesn't sound mature enough to make such a decision.
And to be sure, if I don't like what you have to say, I'm immortal. When you're dead, I'll still be alive.
That is the most American thing I have ever heard of. It's hard not to feel a bit patriotic reading this paragraph. Behind all the fat jokes, paid Russian propaganda posted to message boards all over the internet about how terrible the U.S. is, and the overblown hype about Trump being Hitler, we're still basically following the old British directive of bringing the soft power of trade to the world. What is so wrong with trade?
Anyway, this isn't the chapter I thought it was. The Crystal Heart Meth will have to wait until next chapter. Boo!
Huh, you're giving me an idea... "Gunmen for Griffons" -- Gentlemen for Mares, but with more griffons and more firearms and slightly less boning. What do you think?
I love how Celestia's letter boils down to "Don't be fucking idiots" just, a lot more wordy.
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Well, they have the * ahem * talons for it.