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I thought this chapter was fantastic! Discord's BS was a little WTF? But, I guess that is the point.
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Thanks! Yeah, it was a little WTF and I'm still worried I went too far with it. But as you say... that was kind of the point.
I'm half-thinking of doing a one-shot story to show what was happening throughout the hotel, including showing the *other* things Five Stars observed from those characters' points of view... Morning Glow, that maintenance worker, the two rival sports stars... perhaps even Autumn Leaf.
Out bucking standing! !!!
Please keep it up.
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Thanks! I'll do my best...
This is pretty good so far, but her major life events lining up with important events from the show seems a little too convenient.
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Thanks. I'll grant that her first one did, but for the second... it happened on that day because Discord's influence *caused* it. She normally wouldn't be that confrontational or have left her post to do so. I guess I should make that more clear in the story...
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I definitely got why she did the second thing, it's not really that big a deal. If it had been just that second time that such a convenient coincidence had occurred I would not have noticed it. It's the two such happenstances happening in the same story so close together that caught my attention.
No way this is your first story, dude. I don't buy it. Either you've done some creative writing in the past or you're just superior to the average writer here. I like to think the latter is the case.
Hello favorite chapter! Also, what the fuck, Discord?!
Oh god... this chapter. My story Fertile Ground can be blamed on this one chapter.
And fifty is... Unleash The Magic.
... Still others will say incredibly sexy appearance. Ahh yes, the first instance of thestrals in the G4M universe.
I love this little G4M detail! Not sure if Xeno did anything like this outside the main story, but it makes sense since actual horses follow the same practice.
Cross fanfiction serendipity.
Understatement of the year! An actual woman is almost never properly satisfied by a man! They're multi-orgasmic, have a finicky sex drive that can be thrown off easily, and require a massive amount of effort just to fire off once. I almost feel bad for them... almost. Even bending my understanding of reality for the fictional setting, the idea of keeping four mares satisfied as one stallion is impossible. I don't care how good he is, no one is that good.
Uhh... yes and noooooooo!
In this story's case, hell to the yes!
Why do you make me consider these things!?
Zing!
I love this fucked up little number so much... Bless you, Firesight! This is my gift to you: Rose and Lily time!
Oh, Celestia; how much do they know?
The flashbacks. The flashbacks!
The lemonade! It was coming out of the faucet when I saw him! I can't even remember what he said, just the smell of burning popcorn and the urge to kiss a mare! I need a drink!
Anything but that! Can you imagine if we'd stayed at the bar? You'd have been covered with... with... half the mares in town!
I'd have been gobbled up like a big, tasty stew!
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I thought I'd never drink chocolate milk again after that...
You sure, um, drank a lot off of me...
Rose! Stahp!
I kept telling myself that, too!
S-so did you, Rose!
Did my ears taste like vanilla too, because they were sore for days after the incident. You also really need to ask before you go inside there with your tongue too! I developed an addiction to cotton swabs because of you!
I didn't know. Shut up! Celestia, bury me, already!
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Daisy say it ain't...
I regret nothing.
Rose, Lily, I did what I had to do... for science.
The horror! The horror! The horror! The horror!
ROSELUCK, Y U NO GIVE ME EGGNOG!?
Excuuuuse me, Princess! I'd say you got plenty off me already with the hot chocolate and my poor neglected ear!
Oh sure, rub it in!
I was, Lily! I was rubbing for days and it wouldn't leave my ear!
You two are so adorable together! (sigh) I miss Winston; he was my favorite son.
Even after everything else, Daisy, you are the biggest deviant I have ever met...
We won't tell if you don't!
I hate you, Discord!
Winston! Your mommy will never forget you!
Fix it!
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Fixed, and thanks.
How you managed to predict an episode title so many years in advance is beyond me, but I am quite impressed.
HAHAHAHAHAAA! You underestimate human resourcefulness.
Then, everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked.