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Nice. What shocked me the most was BlueBlood, though i can guess everyone can change. Well he still acts the same but he has come to change his views.
Also well im still hoping you will use what i send you awhile back
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Thanks. Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about it. You'll see it next chapter, not this one--she hasn't read her mail yet, after all!
6305293 i hope thee are more mails. I also see Five stars saying something like "I receved a letter that filled me with joy" or something along those lines
Well holy shit. Did Blueblood somehow win about a thousand Awesome Points here? Methinks he did.
This fills me with an overabundance of felicitous emotions, the likes of which cannot be described by mere human verbal or symbolic communication. If there was someone close enough for me to hug, I would Pinkie Pie hug the hay out of them.
Unfortunately, there exists no one close enough for me to enact my intense desire. I shall compromise by embracing my Pinkie Pie plushie with enough force to make her squee! I am not certain of how I can thank you properly, firesight. The act of you working and publishing this story for us to see, is simply divine darling.
There are seldom few published and professional authors who, in my opinion, rival your authorship and creativity. This narrative and you good sir have both earned a very deep seated admiration and adulation within my proverbial heart. Please keep up the amazing awesomeness that is you and your stories, the world needs it.
About time you came back. You sure took your sweet time.
And anyone who takes the comment above seriously deserves a good head check.
So, nothing much to say about this one, except I'm very glad Bluey tasted the traditional human medicine and came ot better for it. A good beatdown or half a dozen will set a babyfaced asshat on the right path eventually!
fuck yes! update!
w00t, new chapter! Thanks Firesight!
Blueblood has grown. Very interesting.
>So our enemies have now enlisted the help of the so-called social justice movement to help their cause.
Oh god, I can just imagine the hashtags on twitter.
#notallmares
#yesallstallions
#zebralivesmatter
I was so happy to see this story updated! And thanks so much for the little shout-out to Honey Dew.
Still eager to read about the arrival of the humans and Five Star's first impression of them.
WooHoo Way to go!
6306828 I had a bad day at work and this comment was so amazing I no longer care. My only regret is I cannot upthumb it more than once. #notyourstud
6307574 Somehow I proofread this and missed that gloriously cheesy joke. Thank you, and thank all of Caneighda! Say hello to Princess Canadance for me.
I'm glad this is back.
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Thanks! Blueblood's a very tricky character to work with. Basically, he's still a bit of prick, but he's the kind you'd want on your side. The main difference is he'll fight for others now and not just himself.
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You're very welcome! Sorry for the wait... but I was possessed by an irresistible urge to ship Twilight Sparkle and Phoenix Wright.
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Dude, you're triggering me! Seriously, this made my day...
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You're very welcome! I thought about telling you, but decided I'd leave it a surprise. And don't worry--it's coming within the next few chapters.
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Thanks for all your help and feedback!
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Sorry, couldn't resist, and neither could she.
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Your post 'twas replete with flowery prose, and left on my cheeks, a blush like a rose.
This is the kind of feedback that I so do crave, to know that others see me as more than mere knave.
I write so that myself and others may find, the worlds within worlds that I see over time.
I am no poet, but my words I choose well, that I may express all these stories I so want to tell.
So thank you for reading and letting me know, how much you enjoy this story which continues to grow!
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Wonderfully said, my fire-sighted friend
Your skill and talent appear to have no end
But I'll have you know, you made me teary
As I but think of the thought nearly clearly
Of how you did this just for me
It sends shivers down mine spine and my heart aflutter
For my pride must hide inside the emotional clutter
That bars feelings of gratitude and felicity
From escape in a method of authenticity
Which belies an expression of stoic rigidity
Where one finds their own instability
But alas, this shall not continue
For I'm sure you had not opted for a poetic venue
That has sprung up so unannounced
As to provide a response, very likely flounced
So I retreat with haste and poor grace
For my rhymes never have had a good taste
As they dance from the tongue that recites each verse
Or in the mind that reads more terse
The lines of this poem that are sadly a curse
In a painful manner, your joy will disperse
Yet I hope with fervent delight
That this structure of words just might show my plight
To you, firesight
Because I wish we may, I wish we might
Discover another in a bond held tight
And this bond is friendship's light
So I ask and beg and plead this night
Won't you be my friend, firesight?
nice chapter !!
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Sure! Just as long as we don't keep writing love poetry to each other.
6313201 Okay! Thanks, I detest trying to rhyme my sentences and structure them in certain ways. Although, we had some nice bromance going on there... I just hope nopony ships us.
Anyways. Where is the next chapter? I-I need my f-fix man. Just, just a t-taste. No, of course I'm not hooked! Okay, maybe a little...
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It was no one incident, she's just got a thing against comfort horses for reasons that might or might not have to do with Big Mac. Here's the relevant chapter of Gentleman for Mares: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60371/3/gentleman-for-mares/take-the-heat-gentleman
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Well, I guess that's as good as theme music as any! You are more than welcome to look at my other works. In fact, I could use a practiced eye on my newest story, Before the Storm: The Rise of Firefly. Not much interest in it so far, and I'm curious if you have any thoughts or recommendations.
And you are of course welcome to check out The Lawyer and the Unicorn as well, if you'd like to see a crossover romance that shouldn't work but does.
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Celestia have mercy, this venomous propaganda has finally made it to equestria
*reads pony, expects celestia - gets blueblood*
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Wait, patron? Blueblood?? I always thought he'd be a pro-herd conservative considering his snooty upbringing
What are you playing at Blueblood?
Of course.. of course.
small typo detected bud. Should be she :)
Nice. Great Turnabout Storm reference. Glad to see her making a cameo here
Woah. Holy-f.
Is that really blueblood and not a changling in disguise? Damn. What a change of heart. It just shows how much of an impact human culture is and vice versa. I thought he was up to something at first when i read the intro. Great execution this part was.
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You still got it firesight, i'll give you that. I'm glad i read this and took a break from my usual routine
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It will get the treatment and thorough mocking it deserves.
Surprise! Yep, it's him. He's still a bit of a prick, but the kind you'd want on your side now, somepony who isn't afraid to speak his mind and tell it like it is. He certainly started out as a pro-herd conservative, but even he's not so dense that being humbled repeatedly won't cause some introspection.
Thank you kindly, sir! New chapter coming soon.
Hello. Just noticed I never answered this. Sorry to not do so at the time, but I was in an unhappy mood then and didn't think I could give a properly measured and thoughtful reply.
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The anti-sex crowd is only half of it. The story in fact attacks both extremes, as I'm pretty sure both would find reason to attack and cancel such an organization as well as the media outlets who published their story.
You mean, just like the present day over about any issue or person you could name? Even aside from that, I'm honestly not sure there would be much room for middle ground over a such an organization. You'd most likely either like them or despise them, sometimes based on who's supporting or opposing them. So I really don't think that the reactions I've portrayed are all that farfetched.
After they came in previously to trash their offices and printing presses, yes, and that wasn't the anti-sex crowd doing it--it was the other extreme.
I'm truly sorry you don't like it, and believe me, you're not the only one who objected on that basis. Yes, I was making a statement about them, and I'm well aware that politics is an instant turn-off for some people. I've tripped over that in C&C at times, too, forcing me to heavily edit a couple chapters.
But here in Five Star Service, I wouldn't change any of it because it became so integral to the story. In fact, given how the last few years have turned out since I wrote this chapter and the ones that followed, I underestimated how bitter the resistence would be and the lengths certain groups would go to.
This work was my first on Fimfiction, and in some ways it remains my favorite (despite looking at earlier chapters and grimacing at my overuse of ellipses) for the unusual narrative story-within-a-story style I employed, as well as the help I garnered from all the authors of the Gentlemanverse along the way, including the sorely missed Demon Eyes Laharl himself.
Your mileage may vary, of course, but I would encourage you to read on to see how she got together with her first human lover, and how she gained her first ever Gentleman, whose identity is a surprise. You'll also learn about the deep scars she bears from at least one casualty of the Cloven War, and how it provided impetus for her to help form G4M.