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BlackAlizebra
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What the buck is up with the grammar and spelling, is it deliberately bad, because it makes this bucking hilarious!
3077603 I Told Y'all i have troubled English. /)_-
This was a really good story.
Keep writing. 
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Oh, ok, that's cool
You can't be serious.
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Wait wtf. You were on another horrible story the other day and you gave positive feedback that time also. Seems fishy
I take back what I just said. This was fucking hilarious. I had to stuff a blanket in my mouth to keep myself from waking up my family with loud laughter. I cant tell if these mistakes are on acident, but this was gold. Im following your ass
Spitfire has a fucking crush on some stranger fan she just met for absolute no shit reason. Fantastic.
I liked it. Some errors yeah but hey It's your first story lol you can only get better
If it makes you feel any better, you can take a look at my two chapters to my first story that I attempted. You can give me feedback if you want. Up to you. Anyways, keep writing. I'm looking forward to your future creations 
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Check out one of the editing or pre-reader groups. There's a few guys that can do translation assistance, if you want it.
EDIT: Also I've seen far, far worse then this. Both on FiMfic and in some threads.
Ohhh, this story. I heard about it some time ago.
Would you be adverse to me riffing this story for fun?
3212507 uh,No MAybe No.
I'm really sorry, I tried to enjoy the story, but I couldn't get past the horrible grammar and no quotation marks, if you revise it a bit and stuff, I'm sure I'll enjoy it
3245793 I will. And I'm deeply sorry for my English.
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It's okay, i think is a good idea, and I hope you become a great writer
3078074 Every time I see your comments, they are always so negative. Why?
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You obviously didn't read the story closely enough.
Next time you try to insult such an incredible romance, at least make sure you're insulting something legitimate; fabrications of the reader's mind aren't grounds to say a story is bad, especially when the author addresses the exact "complaint" you have in the story.
This is a joke, right?
4040181 Sadly,No.
This grammar needs to be purged with fire.
4050572 I like your story. Why does it have down votes?
4243114 Because of bad english writing. To Narrow it down. it Grammar,Word Usage,and Punctuation,Capitalize.
4243613 I know how it feels. My story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings also got down votes because of bad grammar, but since I got help from two editors Silver Blade and eggynack my story been getting up votes, maybe they could help you. Want to check out my story?
4243905 sure.
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He doesn't know what he's talking about. Don't get an editor. Your story is perfect just the way it is. 
Don't listen to this Ace Combat fan guy.
Augh... why do I continue to torture myself by reading horribly composed sh*t?
I suppose there are a few redeeming components. I enjoyed the fact that you didn't capitalize every single word à la Jaden Smith on Twitter. You just capitalized a good bunch of them, which is commendable. I also enjoyed it when it was done.
Overall, I can't say that this is clop for the sake of clop. I mean, when it's clop for the sake of clop, the author usually tries to write the clop well, because that's all the story has going for it. Here, I don't even know what this is. I'm guessing the author had an idea, and scribbled it down on the way to the bathroom so that he wouldn't forget it, and then couldn't read his own handwriting, so he just copied it as best he could and submitted it without proofreading or spellchecking anything at all.
Mediocre, at best, I'm sorry to say. I mean, you had an idea, which is cool. But the execution is done so horribly that I can't bring myself to like it.
5314738 WELL, NOPONY IS TRYING TO MAKE YOU LIKE IT. PLUS I KNOW IT SUCK BUT AT LEAST I HAVE THE BALLS TO DO (EVEN IF I DIDN'T DO RIGHT). and i sorry to caps every letter i haven't gotten a lot of rude comments (and attacks) but i can only handle so much shit From Everypony here.
Well that changed my life. And, uh, not for the better.
8057676 uh, your welcome.
This story is so shit! It’s like you don’t even know what the word grammar means! This story isn’t even readable. And I’ve seen all of the responses that you’ve made to the other people that have commented. YOU CANT TAKE CRITICISM. The comments are trying to tell you what’s wrong and your just flat out ignoring them! Just delete this fucking terrible story and delete your account with it