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........ What the hell.

Pen Stroke is going to go insane on this.

~Skeeter The Lurker Regidar

Selbi #2 · Jul 15th, 2013 · · 1 ·

Thoroughly enjoyed it. Definitely a worthy sequel to a story I've never read and probably never will.

10/10 molested fillies!

well that was sexaliciously repulsive

More plz

Yay~ Go rape!

I came.

fukken hot

Shame, I probably would have enjoyed a Nyx rape fic if you actually bothered to not write like an kid with ADD..

....Raped with a cucumber.................. FUCK YOU INTERNET FUCK YOU!

I feel sorry for the proofreader who had to approve this... And btw, zucchini works better.

Wow I am usually numb to many thing but i'm discusted right now so i'll give you a thumbs up for thay.:rainbowderp:

Ima just gonna go over here, and you know fap cry

HMMM; you know there is venting anger and frustration, and then there is this. Please just vent on here; we don`t need psycotic brony serial killers out in the world. *Laughs inwardly while reaching for a gun* lol. But seriously though; not bad for *heh heh* a....troll..fic.:pinkiehappy: PLEASE DON`T HURT ME!

I won't read since this is apparently shit, but I appreciate the sentiment.

There is no way Pen Stroke would EVER accept this as an official sequel to Past Sins! And even if he did, I wouldn't!:pinkiesick:

No. Just no.

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Woooooooow that was awesome XD

.......this is just stupid. nyx is not a bad oc to start worth............ there are far, far, FAR worse.

3744933 Your just stupid.

3716125 That is too bad because it is official now.

2894862 But I don't care what you write because you suck at it. So that does not make me sad.
3723240 How about yes.
3715332 Would you change your mind if i sounded you're urethra with asparagus.
3703908 Its spelled digested.
3715163 You are a homosexual. please get AIDS and die of a painful death.

3991462 *sees that the summary still says unofficial*

*blocks you for being a dick and a troll*

Contains everything ever indeed

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Fucking beautiful. I've always hated the original. Thank you. :rainbowlaugh:

When people said I need to read more clopfics to get better at it...I just forgot about tha part when I started reading this. Call me a superfreaky superfreak, but this was just laugh-out-loud funny

Is Nyx a male in your awesome story?

welp time to present this to my friend on Steam with the name of Nyx and say have fun.

Hmmm i wonder what that song of sadness was.....*is imaging the sad violin music meme*

I am so confused right now. Literally what is the point of this?

Perfect 5/7

"Sorry is not good enough", Twilight informed her sternly. Then she beat the fuck out of Nyx. "You worthless cunny. You are not even good enough to be my daughter anymore if you get horny from getting hit with a stick you little fuck."

So, making it worse is the solution?

Then she used her magic to punch Nyx in the stomach until Nyx peed all over the cucumber. Having thus lubed the vegetable, she proceeded to ram it into Nyx's virgin filly cunt in a shower of blood and piss.

What

While Nyx cleaned the taste of her anus off Twilight, Twilight spanked her 8000 times with the riding crop until Nyx's plot was bleeding. Then she beat Nyx some more and made her sleep in a dog cage all night. But Nyx didn't sleep. She cried really loud and it was fucking annoying. So Twilight came out and made Nyx suck on a cattle prod before she jammed it up Nyx's asshole and electrocuted her.

What the fuck

All alone Nyx started singing a sad song of sadness. But then Twilight came back and broke her glasses and cut her with the pieces and then fixed them and said Nyx cut herself for attention and got a court order saying she had to stay home all the time so she would not kill herself. She then sat in her library and used Nyx as a footstool while fagging up a book that said HOW TO GET AWAY WITH SEXUALLY MOLESTING & RAPING ALICORN FILLIES on the cover.

Well, this was surprisingly not as traumatizing as I thought it would have been...

That was...something

I can't help but wonder if this is nothing more than a hate fic towards Pen Stroke's "Past Sins." Whatever it is, it is one of those things I wish I could forget I ever read.

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The better question is why did you even read it, to begin with? Past Sins is overrated (and Nyx even more so). But even I know this is overkill, just reading the description.

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I ran across it in the overly stupid fan fiction group and figured that I may as well. The writing style made it bad enough and the only reason I pushed myself through it is because I didn't really want to comment on something I didn't at least finish a whole chapter on.

Talk about blast from the past lol

Why would you waste your limited time on this Earth writing crap like this?

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