• Published 27th Apr 2013
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A Good Share of Lives - Sea Pony



This is the life of Winter Song a young water elementalist who will do everything to protect her family from every evil forces that dare threathen them and Equestria

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We Declare War


``DISCORD!!`` The voice of Celestia shook the entire castle as she threw magic lasers at his arrogant smirk.

``Sister it just a screen calm down!`` Luna tried unsuccefully to calm her sister, Celestia turn her glare at her.

``Lulu, Discord have been way too far this time, if the elements is not with us we must do the neccesary.`` Luna gulp nervousely.

``And what is it sister?`` Celestia didn’t respond instead she made her horn glow her eyes turn to black before she release the spell. Luna gasp in shock her eyes wide in horror at what she saw in the sky.

A eclipse, even if it was not seen for centuries, every single habitant of the world who would lift their eyes into the sky would know what this mean. Equestria had declare war.

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The elements of harmony gasp in shock at the sky, ``Of all the things that could happen. THIS IS THE WORST POSSIBLE THING!`` No one dare to contradict Rarity on this. Fluttershy was just repeating ‘oh my goodness’ over and over again.

``We must talk to the princesses! Luna said to come to Canterlot when we learn something important I don’t think we can learn more on the situation at the moment.`` She levitate a midnight blue gem out of her saddlebag. ``Stay close to me girls, to Canterlot we go`` All the girls follow her order.

She close her eyes in concentration when it’s was evident she had put enough magic to activate the spell she open her eyes. Just in time to see a familiar filly draging her sister jumping in the group. ``Winter!? No!`` It’s was too late as she accidently teleport the fillies with her to Canterlot.

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Kolard the new general of Griffonya look at the now floating country in fascination. ``Ehehehe, Like that the ponies have declare war eh? I wonder who is bonker enought to attack them. I certainly have no respect for these grass eater, but I wouldn’t dare to lay a claw on the fake goddess, especially since her sister return.

And that without mentioning the bearers of harmony who now have an alicorn princess with them. I almost fell pity for the invader, but if he attack he had it coming.`` The general snickered. ``I should report this to the queen she will have my head if I don’t.``

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A lone cat in the streets of manehatan look at the sky in interest. ``Mmh war eh? I didn’t think I would ever be concerned if one did happened, but things have change since I moved from Griffonya. Winter Song will need me, even if she don’t remember from when she was Dream. I owe her for giving me a chance in this paradise call Equestria and I will help her and her family the best I can`` A slow smile crept into her face. ``It will be just like the old times I can’t wait!`` The cat know as Soft Paw began her journey to Ponyville.

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A loud metalic whining sound was heard in the middle of cloudstale. A blue police call box appear out of nowhere confusing a lot of Pegasi. The door open and a stallion voice could be heard. ``Clouds? I through we were going to fillydelphia? Well this is quite interesting, Dinky Doo do you still know this cloud walking spell?``

A muffle ’yes’ was heard before the sound of a horn casting a spell was heard. The Doctor jump on the cloud. ``Fascinating! I always love how you ponies could construct entire cities in cloud-``

``Doctor`` Dinky said calmly.

``But that nothing compare of how your technology are confusing, I mean you have far west middle age and modern in a single-

``Doctor`` This time it was the voice of an older wall eyed mare.

``And let not forget how you can avoid war at so much occasions it’s the reason I love this race so much you always so peaceful and full of life its-``

``DOCTOR!`` The doctor stop his rambling and look at the two annoyed mares, Dinky point at the sky and the Doctor saw the eclipse.

``Oh no this is not good not good at all, I usually avoid war like this when the ponies can fight themself, but if Equestria is in danger that mean Epona is too, I’m sorry girl but I have to help my daughter, I will depoze you to Ponyville but-``

``No, we’re coming with you`` The Doctor was able to protest but Ditzy didn’t gave him the chance. ``You help so many ponies in your long life, it your time to be helped when you need it and you can’t do anything about it.``

Slowly but surely a excited grin force itself in the time traveler face. Before he ran in his machine and pressing the cordinations ``Alright, let’s go to Canterlot girls, and let kick some invaders flank!``

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Discord laugh at what he saw in the sky, ``Oh Celly for a moment I throught you didn’t have it in you, look like I was wrong, this will be even better than what I through!``

Nightmare Moon was by his side, this time throught she had the body of a unicorn mare her name was Fleur something if she recall right, bah she didn’t care who it was she was just happy to have a appropriate body of her own after so long.

Not far away Tiritero had two black eyes and was glaring at the tyrant of the night. ``This chick will not have any cake from me when I will rule this country, that for sure.``

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Sonata was slowly playing his violing at the balconie of the castle he was suppose to play with Octavia tonight but it got cancel because of these earthquakes and now Celestia had declare a open fight with this mess up monster he saw at the screen.

He through he leave all this fight and violence when he won the duel of souls with his father Kolard. But look like it’s never fully over at least he had ten years of peace that much more than what he could ever have in Griffonya.

``*Sigh* Well back home I fough because I was force to, but here I have the choice.`` He look down in Canterlot in contemplation. ``Equestria gave me more than what I ever dream and they didn’t want anything else than hear my talent at music. They accept me a predator of a race who they fear since they were born, I will be proud to give my life for this country.``

He look in the distance he saw a rural little town that made him smile in nostalgia. ``Peace Dreamer it’s because of you crazy son of a bitch that I have all this, you don’t excist anymore and you never got to marry Fluttershy, but I will protect your adoptive mother with my last breath for you, Winter Song.``

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``Princes Luna`` Luna look from her throne and saw a zebra, the only zebra of the royal guard.

``What are you doing here corporal Brew Blade?``

``I want to be moved in the friendship guards.`` Luna look at her with a surprise expression.

``Are you sure? You will be retrograde to a private if you do this``

``No offense to you but if I stay in the night guards I would probably be unfaithful to your command as soon as princess Twilight is in danger, so I would be better in the friendship guards for this battle.`` Luna smile in understanding.

``I, Luna hereby decree that Brew blade will be at the service of the friendship guards for the duration of this war`` Brew smile before Luna receive a signal on her horn.

``It’s look like Twilight have finally come at the castle I have to go go join the other guards.`` The zebra follow her order and immediatly took a position wathing the city.

Author's Note:

So I started to do a Q&A thing, here the two first questions I was asked.

1. Did you base the good share verse on a book of something? or you just create it by yourself.

Well I created my universe with a lot of things, the first is my little pony: Friendship is magic. (Obviously) a lot of things are also imagined by me of course. The council of the elder gods by example, Author was inspire by God from the catholic religion with a lot of change by me since I didn't want the clichée powerful and mysterious being that create the world. I wanted a being more warm that was not afraid to talk with his creations.

Gaia was a little inspired by Vinetion a OC that could create all sort of plants at her will but her personality will be a lot different from her later on, I later learn that Gaia was a name given to the goddess of life in the greek mythology. For Kira I based his name from Death Note since he's the god of death, even if he's a lot different from Light, Harmony come from me entirely.

Epona was of course inspire by The legend of Zelda: Ocarina of time, I throught it would be appropiate to give the name of a horse that help the hero of time, to a demi-goddess pony that control time.

The Soul Reaper was inspired by the Akatsuki from Naruto I like the secret type of organisation that want a power that any mortal could only dream to create their own twisted 'paradise'. Namely the shard of lifes or as Infinitus call it the Editor and if you didn't notice the fight scenes of my fic are a lot based on animes so it was a good things to go with that.

The plans of Discord for Equestria as you probably guess is based on Sword art online the first season and I will later on use my basic knowledge on MMORPG for the rest of the Discord's game ark.

As for the things about spirituals energy some of it was inspire by myself but the offensive attacks was a lot based on the shonen animes and the things about the soul catchers was inspired of Skyrim. But the thing that inspire me the most is a fic call Living the dream here on fimfiction, It's not the best fic and the quality is descent but not the best, but that one of the fics that introduce me to the brony fandom and it because of it that I wanted to write in the first place.

I like the type of fics that OC's live in ponyville and random shit happen to them with a lot of humor, probably because that the concept of the show itself so that why I'm trying to put more comedy into this episode of the A good share verse

2. WHY YOU DON'T HAVE MORE FOLLOWER

A lot of things actually firstly according by the comments I had, my grammars and my punctuation, the fact that I put a sex tags when there was only two clops scenes didn't help in the first fic either. But I think one of my worst mistake was my description, before I change it was sounding like a wish fulfillemen fic so much that it hurt.

So in big where I fail was to throw myself in writting a story without whatsoever experience and editor, I still don't have a editor today, but I at least have a lot more experience than before.

So that was all the questions I had for the moment I hope to have more later.

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