Hey there, if all of you remember that I was going to make a separate blog post focusing on this story? Well here it is, yes I am going to revise the whole story from the ground up. While I am still going with the Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles inspiration, I'm going to have to delete the current chapters except the prologue. There is a reason to that...

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Revisions for Wandering Through Realities, Chapter II: Chaos Orb has been completed.

REVISIONS INCLUDE:
(1) More thought process and dialogue in and between characters.
(a) Discord has been made slightly more mischievous-thinking.
(b) Better dialogue and thought process for Fluttershy.
(c) Increased thought process for Twilight.

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It has been nearly a year since I posted Rest Well, Twilight and in that time I have been working to improve my writing skills. I have gotten to a point where I feel like I can finally go back and touch up what I feel was my best work, at that time. So, that is what I am doing. I will post another blog when I have finished the changes and I hope to hear what you think of them.

I've revised the story so far with minor edits.

I've made Twilight far less critical of Fluttershy.

I've cut back on descriptions where I could, mostly kept the flowery stuff for Fluttershy's vision.

I hope these minor edits help the story flow better, for upcoming chapters it will be easier to hopefully not be stilted.

Apologies for being absent on the updates. I've been attempting to sit down and write chapters as of late.

Right now, I'm focused on two things. Writing and backlogging chapters until the end of my story and making major revisions (grammar wise) to my existing chapters.

If you don't see an update by the end of this month, one should definitely make an appearance in February March.

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I'm finally figuring out how to make these chapters more readable and easy to understand.

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For anyone familiar with my work, you may remember my story, Guardian Halo. But if you're new to my work, or if you need a refresher, here's the story description:

When Starswirl the Bearded sets out to find an end to the chaos plaguing Equestria, he asks his friend Halo to accompany him. The pegasus mare has yet to earn her cutie mark, but perhaps she can find her purpose along the way...

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So, with the last few chapters mostly written out, I'd like to do some revision on the already posted chapters. I'd like to know if anyone here has any criticisms that I might use to work on the story, because I'm my own worst critic, and I know better than to sit here for a month revising it instead of finishing it.

Here are some issues that I think are there but would like second thoughts on, because I'm not really sure how prevalent they are to other people...

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Hello there, everypony! Chapter XI revision for, The True Nightmare, is out now. Hope you enjoy it!

Chapter XI - A Danger That Elevates

Hello, all my wonderful readers,

So, I've been thinking about something, and I'd like your feedback:

With Howlite Howler 3 drawing to a close, I found myself looking back on Shiva's journey. And I remembered that Luke was originally based on the Lucario Pokemon from... well, Pokemon.

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If you're not currently reading the story this pertains to, move along. Otherwise, click 'Read More'.

Just a heads up everyone, mostly took away pieces of the story in reconsideration, so you may want to take another look at the most recent chapter published of Celestia's New Student. Trixie is no longer 'an alternate universe version of Starswirl the Bearded'. That's pretty much it. Hope I didn't ruin the story for anyone.

Well, after multiple attempts at writing and rewriting the next chapter to Caring Sparkle, I've realized that this story has taken a turn for the worse and I completely missed it. Saying this, I have decided to go back and rewrite EVERY CHAPTER. I know I know, some of you are mad or disappointed, but please hear me out. I kept looking back at my notes, doing outline after outline, and even doing multiple rough drafts only to realize that where I wanted to go with this story is far off from

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As I am now about two weeks away from graduation, I have started updating The Alicorn Cutie Mark. All chapters have been pulled for revision and I am hoping to have a new, revised chapter posted by June. New image added, which I feel suits the story better, especially for where I am thinking the story might go after the revision. Will possibly alter the description of what the story is about, but will figure that out when I get to posting the new chapter.

I'll be revising the chapters for Black Fury, Red Logic now so don't be surprised if a chapter suddenly disappears. These updates will be sporadic as have another story I'm working on and I'll be moving soon, so my time will also be sporadic. With that said, my stories will still be on semi-hiatus since I don't know how long until my internet is cut. I still have plans for some updates I just don't know when I'll post them.

I've finally rewritten and reformatted my highly controversial story Back to Normal.

Let the flame wars recommence.

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I said it was coming, didn't I? And indeed, it has arrived. Version 2.0 of One Drink, with all sorts of little errors fixed and polished away! Not only that, but with the impending release of Colony, One Drink has seen its final price drop! You can now grab the whole thing for only 99 cents!

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I have realized...it has been a year since I first uploaded a chapter and introduced my first story, "Adventures Tale." Thanks to the inspiration from other writers, Radbunny and SeaUrchin, I got into writing this book and know it should have been finished by now.

But, as a recent commentator, Glitched Grim, pointed out, the story is back and is "very active!" And you are right....

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Hiya everyone who ever read my clop-fic, it has been a troubling that I been getting bad reviews because of my clop-fic, lack of an editor and proofreader so I decided to look for one. I know in my last blog I said I would get one but I didn't get the best one so I'll try to find one and once I have a good editor and proofreader I can make more story until then there won't be anymore clop-fic until further notice

So, I'm bad with release dates. I said Friday but I got through all the revising the Pre-Reader asked me to do last night, so I decided "Screw it, give the people the new thing!" Thus, I have uploaded the new and improved first three chapters of The Chance of a Lifetime for your viewing pleasure!

A quick list of things I changed from the original upload:

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