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When Starswirl the Bearded sets out to find an end to the chaos plaguing Equestria, he asks his friend Halo to accompany him. The pegasus mare has yet to earn her cutie mark, but perhaps she can find her purpose along the way...
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I'm going to stick with "accompany" for now, since it fits the tone I use for the stories themselves. Can I ask why you would use "assist" or "aid" instead of help? I do agree that "aid in" sounds better, but I'm curious as to what your thought process was. Thanks again!
Thanks for the suggestions.
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You're definitely right. I cannot tell you how often I go back and retool my stories before I post them, and sometimes after as well. I shall be more vigilant with the descriptions as well. Thanks for spotting that.
You just keep getting better! Absolutely ADORED this one.
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Thank you so much! So glad you're enjoying my stories! I tried to add in more descriptions to this one, so I hope that helped. Thanks also for all the support!
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Thank you so very much!
Ohmigosh, I am so flattered! Of course you may do so, but please just let them know where it came from.
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Of course! Thank you so so so very much! I have no art skills myself, but if you would like a proof-reader or editor or some other kind of service in return, I would be happy to do so. You have no idea how happy this is making me! I have a picture of Halo on my computer at home that I will be happy to send you if you would like to see it. Thanks again!
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Haha, indeed! Though I'll probably have to finagle a bit to get it to you. I just remembered that my computer has some malware on it, so I'll have to be careful sending it to you. I think I can do it, but if you'd like me to wait, I can so there's no risk of your computer being infected.
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Hehe, alright. Thanks again! I know just how to get it to you. Also, thank you for the follow and favorite as well! Forgot to say that in all of the excitement.
PS: I just checked out your DeviantArt page. Your art is amazing!
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I'll fix them ASAP! I also need to fix Star Swirl and make it Starswirl. Just caught that on my last read-through.
Oooh, thank you for catching those! While I know a plethora of words and how to spell them, some do still trip me up.
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I do too, but I've spelled it as Starswirl in my other stories. I'd like to be consistent.
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Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! That being said, what was it that needed editing? I'd be happy to fix any errors I've made.
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In any case, I'm really happy that you like her so much. 
Thanks, comrade!
How did I miss reading that you wanted to meet Lyric?
I have commenced the reading campaign!
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Haha, why thank you very much! I do hope you enjoy the stories that Lyric has to offer. X3
6049615 That's my plan. :P
Intrigued.
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I am pleased to hear so! Thank you also for adding this tale to your favorites.
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*Hat tip*
One of the best pony afterlife headcanons I've seen. I have my own that vary from time period to time period in my universe.
Boy, Clover is in very deep water.
That gal can't stay out of trouble.
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*smiles and bows in return*
Thank you kindly for saying so! I am truly humbled to hear such kind words. Also, I very much enjoyed your story with Clover the Clever, and really all of your stories so far!
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I love this story so much! It's one of my all-time favorite stories.
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Especially coming from you!
Thank you so much, Po. I really do appreciate that.