Call Of Cthulhu-Shy Revised. · 1:44am May 29th, 2020
I've revised the story so far with minor edits.
I've made Twilight far less critical of Fluttershy.
I've cut back on descriptions where I could, mostly kept the flowery stuff for Fluttershy's vision.
I hope these minor edits help the story flow better, for upcoming chapters it will be easier to hopefully not be stilted.
Reads post, notices that it's about a story that I'd been patiently awaiting an update for, cheers just a bit, happy that the author hasn't abandoned it.
looking forward to seeing what you'll be posting!
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Expect an update today and perhaps another sometime over the weekend.