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TCadance The Crystal Princess
MLP: FiM
MLP: Movie
Dark
Adventure
Princess Mi Amore Cadenza is not who she said she is, she had no idea WHO she really is
Gore
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Cadance
Shining Armor
Main 6
King Sombra
Princess Amore
Sean Tan the Brony · 28k words · 32 1 · 650 views
TAll Day, Everyday.
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Drama
Slice of Life
Follow the journey of a little girl who takes her football to the next level!
Human
Anthro
Alt. Universe
OC
Penanka72 · 78k words · 71 11 · 531 views
TThe Archmage's Last Bow
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Romance
Adventure
Comedy
One would think that after the victory over Cozy Glow, Tirek, and Chrysalis, that everything would be at peace. Unfortunately for Twilight Sparkle and Nova Shine, Equestria's new Archmage, the world itself could now be in jeopardy.
Profanity
Violence
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
OC
Starswirl
Rytex · 169k words · 40 2 · 2.2k views
TIf You Want Peace, Prepare For War
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Comedy
Equestria is fighting her first World War after the 2nd Industrial revolution. She hasn't fought a war in a while. Before his death, Discord enlists the help of several creatures that are all too familiar with the concept.
Gore
Sex
Human
Alt. Universe
Apple Bloom
Scootaloo
Sweetie Belle
OC
Main 6
tranhdxrbntd · 182k words · 649 61 · 14k views
TTeam Superstars: Winds of Change
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Who knows that finding a filly on a beach can be the start of your journey? A stylist of Maretine Bay sure was not aware
Alt. Universe
Other
Thunder
Zoom
Lulamoon-Crystal · 36k words · 9 1 · 529 views
EShow Me The Stars
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
A young boy in the city dreams of seeing the stars through the smog. Far away, a certain Princess hears his dreams.
Human
Luna
6-D Pegasus · 4.3k words · 63 0 · 462 views
EHer Majesty's Special Helpers
MLP Gen 5
Comedy
Drama
Slice of Life
Follow Thunder Flap and Zoom Zephyrwing on a typical day in the service of Queen Haven: Overseeing security prep, smuggling Alphabittle in for a not so secret rendezvous, waiting for Zipp and Pipp to show up. All in a day's work.
Other
Queen Haven
Thunder
Zoom
SuperPinkBrony12 · 4.8k words · 18 0 · 247 views
EA New Generation: Friendship is Magic
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
On the eve of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunny Starscout realizes an ancient evil is on the verge of returning. Now it’s up to her to stop it; if only she could find the mysterious artifacts known as the Elements of Harmony.
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Nightmare Moon
Mane 5
Sky_Wishes · 14k words · 51 2 · 910 views
EElement of Balance
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Slice of Life
What if Celestia had a son in Friendship is Magic? How would he fit into the story? Find out as he joins Twilight Sparkle and her friends on their journey.
Alt. Universe
Spike
Celestia
OC
Main 6
Moondancer
SamSwordsman123 · 104k words · 79 12 · 3k views
TClan: Adventures In Another World
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Slice of Life
Hitch leaves his home of Maretime Bay to help his son.
Violence
Profanity
Crossover
OC
Hitch Trailblazer
Sparky
Snugglewarmscale · 8.6k words · 122 views
EEclipse Awareness (Or Lack Thereof)
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Following Twilight's coronation, Celestia and Luna organize a mutual solar eclipse to celebrate the end of their rule. Unfortunately, they forgot to let anypony know of this.
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
6-D Pegasus · 4.3k words · 177 5 · 1.6k views
EDiamond at a Crossroads
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
(Takes place within the universe of "The Sitter with the Diamond Tiara" and its semi-sequel "A Dazzling School Daze".) Plagued by uncertainty about her future, Diamond Tiara visits Cheerilee in hopes the teacher can guide her one last time.
Diamond Tiara
Cheerilee
SuperPinkBrony12 · 2.9k words · 16 0 · 139 views
EA Wild Date
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
Visiting your crush’s parents is rather an experience. Especially on a date
OC
Other
Lulamoon-Crystal · 14k words · 12 0 · 295 views
EAurora By The Sea
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Primrose remembers the very first date her and her husband went on.
Other
Hitch Trailblazer
Sparky
Snugglewarmscale · 12k words · 102 views
TBad Dragon's Short Stories
MLP: FiM
Anthology
Got a minute? It will take you even less to read one of these unrelated short stories designed for instant reader’s gratification.
Spike
Bad Dragon · 10k words · 34 39 · 1k views
EPonyville Kindergarten
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
Every character you know, every episode you remember, what if none of that happened. What if it all happened in a kindergarten class.
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
Other
Main 6
Visharo · 8.9k words · 78 6 · 1.2k views
TColor War 1 (Rewritten)
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
Tragedy
A war started over tension among the color countries.
Gore
Death
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Main 6
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 6k words · 233 views
EThe Tale of Spike's Egg
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Tragedy
(Collab with yodajax10. Takes place immediately after "Father Knows Beast".) Spike flies to Canterlot to ask Princess Celestia for answers about his past. Princess Celestia opts to tell Spike about how his egg ended up in her care.
Spike
Celestia
OC
Other
Main 6
SuperPinkBrony12 · 9.4k words · 25 0 · 640 views
EDON'T WRITE TO PRINCESS CELESTIA AT 3 AM (GONE WRONG!)
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
The Cutie Mark Crusaders test the urban legend of writing to Princess Celestia at 3am. Nothing goes wrong.
Spike
Celestia
CMCs
6-D Pegasus · 2.7k words · 228 2 · 2.6k views
TThe Malevolent Multiversal Misadventures of Mare (April Fools 2024 Special)
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Comedy
Random
Once upon a time, there was a random pony in Ponyville. When a villain shows up, this overpowered Mary Sue of a character must venture bëÿönd Extria im order to find thr Generic MacGuffin. Only then will she have a chef of defeating this boring villa
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Other
Bat Pony
Misty
Admiral Producer · 32k words · 17 2 · 126 views
EThe Long Wait
MLP: FiM
Sad
Celestia counts down the centuries until her sister's return.
Celestia
6-D Pegasus · 1.7k words · 101 1 · 982 views
EOne of Them
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
When a setback made Starlight Glimmer seriously consider if she might be undeserving of friends, Spike had an important talk with her.
Spike
Main 6
Starlight Glimmer
ThePinkedWonder · 2.9k words · 35 1 · 485 views
TBatmare and Super Dragon: Worlds Collide
MLP: FiM
Drama
Thriller
(A crossover sequel to both "Batmare Triumphant" and "Dragon of Steel II".) The worlds of two costumed superheros: Batmare and Super Dragon, become intertwined. And the two heroes must adjust to their shared universe quickly.
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Applejack
Spike
Other
SuperPinkBrony12 · 17k words · 116 views
TOutsiders
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Mystery
Slice of Life
Stuck in another world as a pony, I must hide what I truly am, else they'll lock me in a dungeon. Easier said than done; I know nothing about their culture! Thankfully, there's someone else who shares my predicament. Together, we'll find a way home.
Profanity
Human
Lyra
Bon-Bon
OC
Main 6
JeSuisLaPorte · 40k words · 61 7 · 1.4k views

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