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Undome Tinwe


Some of them want to use you, some of them want to be used by you/Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused.

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The waiter has just made a very funny mistake. See, he thinks Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Rarity are all dating, when it's actually just Twilight and Dash. Rarity thinks it's very funny not to correct him. Now how far can she take the joke?

A spiritual sequel to Flimsy Pretexts, written as a response to the effervescent Monochromatic. An effort to close our loop of RariTwi x Dash, then RariDash x Twi - naturally there needed to be a TwiDash x Rarity for balance.

Preread by Pearple Prose and Undome Tinwe

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Fiddlesticks's life had been dull for years, and she always knew what to expect. Then she met Lightning Dust.


Third Place in the FiddleDust Contest.

Thanks to mushroompone, Seer, and Undome Tinwe for editing.

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Fleur de Lis has it all: a nice house, a great job, a physique that mares envy, and an invitation to every high society event in Canterlot.

So why, at one such party, does she want to do nothing more than to run home?


My entree for the May Pairings Contest 2022.

Find the rest of the submissions here!

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Rarity is getting older. She tries not to think about it most days. She usually suceeds! There's just one problem; one nagging thought that won't leave her head no matter how busy she is. She's running out of time. For as much as she's accomplished in the world there's still one thing missing from the perfect life she dreamed of all those years ago: a wife. A ring. A promise, in sickness and in health, to love and be loved in return.

Twilight Sparkle may have hundreds of years but Rarity does not.


Written for a contest ran in a friend's server where it placed second and was read and enjoyed by my friends, whom I love and care for a great deal. If you do not have a group of creative and caring people to share your art with I would recommend beginning that search posthaste; there is no greater joy than sharing your art with people you love and who love you back. This story was edited by one such friend, the quick-witted Supreme RariTwi Scholar themselves; Undome Tinwe. Cover art credit to Taikochan.

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There exists, sometimes, a tenuous barrier between love and friendship. It's a line we must all tread at some point in our life. It is with great care and quiet fear that Coco Pommel now sees herself walking this very same tightrope. One on end is love; warm and real and painfully possible. On the other is friendship; comfortable and easily understood, if claustrophobic in the limits of its language.

Today, and every other day, Coco Pommel will walk towards love.


Editing help provided by the ever-sharp and delightfully gay Undome Tinwe. Cover art by Provolone Pony.

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Pinkie Pie had a big secret. Twilight wishes it had stayed one.


The original version of this story was an entry to a writeoff round with the prompt Rot.

Thanks to Undome Tinwe, Seer, and LunaTheFox for editing.

Cover art cropped from a piece by LambiBelle, and it is used with permission. DB: 2273080

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Everyone knows Rarity has amazing flanks; Rainbow Dash is sure of that. So what is Applejack upset about?


A non-entry to a Quills and Sofas Panic Fiction with the prompt "Do I Know You?"

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Twilight Sparkle and Potion Nova work to make the Cosmos Elixir, but after an embarrassing moment makes Twilight run away, she discovers that Potion Nova may have quit making potions altogether.

Set both before and after Pony Life season 2, though no knowledge of that season is needed. Familiarity with Pony Life season 1 is needed, however.

An entry into the May 2021 Pairings contest.

Preread by Undome Tinwe.

Cover art by Ninny.

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"You, though? A complete and utter mystery to me, even now. Do you know how infuriating it is to have a pony who is a puzzle I cannot solve?"


A story owed to themoontonite for nearly a year. Thank you for being patient with me.

Thanks to Undome Tinwe and The Red Parade for editing.

Cover art by SkullJooce.

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Cheerilee loves Meadowbrook. Meadowbrook loves Cheerilee. Neither of them knows how to say it, but the bigger problem is that the field of romantics has changed significantly over the course of a thousand years.


Entry for the May Pairings contest. Written with the help of the great and powerful Mushroom, the charming and unyielding themoontonite, the ever-present and encompassing UndomeTinwe, and the all-knowing and faithful Wishcometrue.

Cover art done by the talented and wonderful Skulljooce/Not Quite Equine. Give them some love!

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