• Member Since 19th Sep, 2018
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shadow rider


To have harmony we must have chaos and order, light and shadow, and good and evil. Only those who have seen the world and it's horrors understands that.

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Hello. I recently read your work "Revenge of the Titan" and, to be honest, the idea hooked me, but its implementation is not very good. It's just too fast, with no explanation. I'm sorry that I certainly don't see you as you are, but still I think it would be better if you showed a little more about how he built factories, how he thought which robots would suit him best, his thoughts on how he got here, why and, most importantly, why? And so the hero you have is just empty, without a personality, like an empty doll floundering in the wind.

(This is constructive criticism)

Thank you for adding A God Among Ponies to your favorites, that means a lot to me, and I hope you keep enjoying it! :eeyup:

Thanks for the fave! I hope you continue to enjoy. :D

Thank you for Favoriting Skeletor, Master of The Empire.

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