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Interesting beginning, but it all felt rushed. Little dialogue. Not sure if that's your intention. A little more description (yeah, I know it sounds vague) with some paragraph breaks. Hope that helps, if only a little.
193832 everlast makes good stuff
I gonna keep my eyes on this one, I'm a sucker for 2nd person stories.
Looking forward to another chapter.
Did i miss something?
What is the thing with the votes?
203897 I'm taking votes on my blog post for who to ship the main character with. All the choices are on my blog post, feel free to go there and vote for who you'd like to see shipped with the main character
great chapter
(I still stand by the gilda pairing)
MOAR
This is actually a really good story keep up the good work.
Personally I like how in this world its not all bright and fluffy. Just a slice of real life with some drunk ponies on the side lol.
Oh and as for my vote, lets go with berry.
Todavia hay tiempo en votar? jeje elijo a Trixie.
338767 Two things. 1: I'm sorry, but I can't read any language other than english, so if you could translate that for me that would be great.
2: If that's a vote for trixie, then you should know that only votes posted on the offical blog post will be counted. It's just too difficult to have to count up votes from both comments and the blog post.
Anyway, thank you for reading the story, and have a nice day!
when will moar be coming?
384683 I'm not sure, I'm still trying to get some ideas together. I've been real busy these past few days, so I haven't had too much time to think about this story.
Y SO SHORT?
And how the hell he's in her house? No really? You said he passed out.
also FIRST
385609 I said he blacked out, not that he passed out. And it's so short so that I could leave a cliff hanger
And a good one at that, I Lolled quite hard at this one
385619 Ok
Oh man lmao! That's some funny shit!
Well than.
FROST!
YAY THARS MOAR!
anyway good chapter i cant stop laughing!
Hahaha made me laugh pretty hard.
Why was he wearing a condom when hes a different species then her?
I guess score one for drunken sex, logic...zero.
MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
plz
Thank you
385619
Is this cancelled or on a reeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaally long hiatus? <:/ I'm actually enjoying this alot!
986250 Neither, I've just been really busy this past while and haven't really had too much time for writing. I'll upload the next chapter asap, I promise. But, it's good to see that it's popular to some degree.
986497
Ah yes, when it comes to good stories, I'm a persistant one! ;)
intro could have been better
MOAR Lyra
Loving the series so far! Keep it up mate!
dude this shit is grate you need to continue it and FAST
Hey in 2 chapters you said that the voting are still own, but in your blog you said that there are over, the love interesting vote are still up? Because if that the case, I will like to vote for Zecora, but men now its more difficult, now that Berry Punch and her child.
Also, with him, wanting to help everyone, I was kind of surprise that Fluttershy didn't got interesting in him, with the things in common they had, then again I'm still trying to process why none of the main six or even the princesses have realized that he need first citizenship and second a roof, its only being 3 days and no even Pinkie has realized that one of her friends is homeless? That is…kind of sad. Especially since all they now what happen and is oblivious he need friends more than ever…I mean jeez so much for support a friend in need.
Also so far he hasn't visit Rarity and had no be having a proper place to stay, (Kind of wander why he didn't go to a motel or cabin when Zecora pay him, but whatever) So we can assume that he wasn't bath for at least 3 days an is wearing the same cloths, witch are cover in alcohol, sweet and possible tears, to name a few…he must be having a very lovely smell at this point.
Ok, with that out of the way I like your story the concept is interesting and he is going to a roller coster of emotions, no to mention that his aptitude of boy scout, is helping him, getting him acceptance from all the town, and is interesting all the struggles that he is enduring while trying to help all pony with problems that he encounter, very noble and altruist from his part, kudos for that.
Please continue I can't wait to see what happen next, by the way, can you explain why is he not looking for a house or someplace to live as his top priority? (Yeah I know he is in the 5 stages of duel, but still, I kind of confuse of why his survival instincts are not telling him to search for refuge, he has having a lot of luck that there hasn't be raining)
P.S: With all his sleeping did he has being talking with Luna?