Max, the renegade cop and the top at the Police Academy has fallen. In the past. Now, he's a underground peace maker doing things his way, until he gets to Equestria. What new things will unfold for our cold hero?
*Romance is up to viewer's suggestion.*
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hmmm... I like
Great idea, can't wait for chapter 2
hi im max payne and this is jackass
HA! never really got into a Max Payne story before ill keep an eye on it.
also no romance please there's already enough of them on FimFiction i cant go 2 pages without seeing a fanfic about Ponys/Humans trying to hump each other it get dull after awhile T_T
That was the best line ever
twilight is in trouble
hi im max shitting payne i died of unicornism bleagh
I like where this is going
keep it up, this is awesome.
I like it but you could really use a proof reader.
I love it!
never played max payne. is it good?
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Great.
wow... that was fast... i shall try it out.
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Start from the first to get a grip of the plot.
942841 is it for xbox 360?
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The third one is on Xbox 360, the other two, I forget. They were made a long time ago. Pretty sure it was PC.
942862i shall check then.
Dang Twilight, never knew you had it in you.
942853 The first two are for PS2, Xbox and PC. The third is for PS3, 360 and PC. You don't really need to play the first two, since I played the third and enjoyed the hell out of it without playing the first two.
Please make more chapters
I'm intrigued.
I'm Max Payne and this is Jackass...nice story lol I like it.
We admitted him into a hospital with the utmost care
Oh Twilight, you lying pony you.
Win, and lots of it
shit and painkillers are about to hit the fan
what i did when the Max grabbed twilight's horn>>>scranton.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw6133-tumblr_m4jeq81K1T1r2kw8v.gif
still got a couple of laughs though i will continue to read i guess
neeeext :0
School started early, thus a HUGE lack of chapters, even though I should be uploading. Very sorry everyone.
I'm... not as dead?
its good to hav u bac man
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Writers block and and giant salami sandwich delayed the chapter, which isn't a good sign for me. Hopefully, I'll remember to write some more chapters so I won't "die" again.
Calvin?
? I don't even... What?
OH SHIT JUST GOT REAL!
black mesa is for fool's apature start's with you
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Black Mesa? I have Aperture too, what are you talking about?
oh then um.... mushroom
dude you kinda died again
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Yep Yep. I'm having a hard time writing another chapter. Damn myself and the ending to chapter 3. Thankfully, I took that part out so I can actually WORK with something. Sorry for the delay.
Here's some compensation music.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HaOzCxSXScU
ok
I call bullshit
I dunno about this one (the story, that is). Max doesn't seem very in-character to me. He seems... dead. Lacking the humour about the absurd situation he's in that's so characteristic of his outlook on everything in the game.
I got a couple of complaints first of all max is not a god damn hitman maybe if passos somehow dragged him into it , max isn't in character in general he is not a blood thirsty maniac he is a tired man tired of fighting also the way he got into equestria i would have prefered somekind of stargate crap over blowing up into equstria maybe he gets in a fight with some cultists wich create a protal to equestria idk anything but blowing up.
The story is good but you nead to change the last chapter.