• Member Since 27th May, 2012
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EXOLIEF


I mainly write porn, it's all in good fun.

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Snips finds a rock. Exactly what it says on the tin.

Short little story for no reason other than for writing inspiration from a while ago.

Warning: Short, Cute, Nothing of Substance.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 19 )

Ew, a non-clop story from Exolief?

It was pretty good.

Yeah, well I have a jar of dirt.:pinkiehappy:

/Smile

Strangely enough, they do make for a nice pairing. I wonder why...

I really don't like them as a couple, Sweetie Belle would be more kinder and compassionate toward him and as for DT I like her with Featherweight a lot more. But I did like this fic all the same. :pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::yay::raritywink::rainbowkiss::derpytongue2::eeyup::moustache::scootangel::twistnerd:

OH MY GOD
ANOTHER GIANT ROCK

The awkwardness of Snips, with the hostility of Diamond. What more could one ask for? :pinkiehappy:

Cute.

One thing that didn't quite mesh though:

The next day, after school, Snips decided that he now had a monkey wrench thrown into his plan.

Either that sentence doesn't belong, since having a monkey wrench thrown into his plan should have made it harder, not "much easier", or else it would be nice to know what he erroneously believes it to mean.

Woo! I feel so proud for being the one who harangued you enough to get this fic on the site *smug* :moustache:

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Fixed. I have no idea why I left that there :rainbowhuh:

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To see how many views you could get before someone pointed it out, of course. :scootangel:

Cute story, I liked it. Well done. :moustache:

I like how that was phrased: "She secretly shared his love of the forest." That's the kind of secret that you'd try to keep to yourself but wouldn't really care too much if anyone found out about. It's like someone finding out you prefer fluorescent bulbs over incandescent ones. It's really too boring of a secret to be embarrassing. It's spectacular.

This was a tasty little cube of cheese. Beginning + middle + end = story, and this had all three parts. No boring filler. No needless toppings. Just short, sweet, and rocky entertainment.

I liked it.
Fluffy and sweet stories are good every now and then.

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