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juststeph


Pegasister, writer, all-around awesome.

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Those who have faced the Elements of Harmony gather at a support group to deal with being defeated. They gather around to sit on uncomfortable chairs and sip stale cider while they talk about their side of the story.

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Comments ( 89 )

I like where this is going, please, continue.

Liked and fav'd just for the Steven Magnet story. Poor guy never seems to be in any fics! The rest is pretty good too! As above, please continue. :pinkiehappy:

There's been a lot of fics involving the villians of my little pony teaming up lately

Yep, Gilda just can't stand the truth.

Poor Steven Magnet, his story had me in tears, but it at least had a happy ending.:moustache:

Aww, the little things were hungry ... and intelligent ... and still ate everything. That actually makes them a bit meaner than normal devouring swarms. :pinkiegasp:

The poor diamond dogs... No match for... :raritycry:

(Joke) Alt. Title: No Sombra Allowed!: The Fantastic Villains Club

When do we get the changelings?

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They're coming up! I'm going through the episodes in order (although skipping the ones without a villain of course).
Don't worry, Chrysalis is going to have her turn to speak.

Jeff approves.

Looking forward to the changelings and king sombra.

... They are coming aren't they?

Changelings ≠ Evil
Changelings = Organisms who need to eat love.

Just curious, do you think King Sombra could say anything beyond growling, grunting, and "Crystals!" ? If so, bring him on here!

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I think there's a lot more to him than was shown in the episode. You'll see when I get there.

xD this is hilarious. I love being able to see a villain's side. I do hope to see the Dragon who was trying to get some sleep. They were rather rude to him. I mean the pegasi can do many weather based things. Why not have a few teams set up to disperse the smoke he snored?

Sorry if I got a bit ranty there but still. Fantastic story. I love how you keep the characters in character and how the interact with each other. I can't wait to see more. A moustache for Steven :moustache:

HAhahahaha! They're all so right, too! The spins that these villains put on their stories make them seem like the good guys, almost!

If you cheat me out of cash, I'm going to kick your-

Priceless!:rainbowlaugh:

Lol that was a good chapter. Glad to see a new chapter up.

:ajbemused: what would celestia care about this?

:rainbowlaugh: to be honest this first chapter did not really have much humor in it but it did have that damned serpent and the Shadowbolts (love those three) but you done real well for the spelling, I'm impressed, I shall read on:twilightsmile:

I bucking LOVE Gilda, she's so awesome, sure she's a bitch but that just how she is and I would not have her any other way...I feel like reading a Gilda story now. But she's my third next to Discord and Trixie and now for my favorite villian's story, you done well, you done well:ajsmug:

:rainbowlaugh: Ahhhh.....Trixie, she's amazing:yay: I love her, she's just so awesome, the odd thing is I hate pride yet I love it when Trixie does it...how strange is that?:facehoof:

Huh, you know I never thought of the Parasprites as villians but now that I heard that story maybe they are.....hmmmmm......what any creature would do or food, huh?:facehoof:

Ahhhh....shit. I don't like that smile Nightmare has, oh wait....what am I talking about? I love that smile, I root for the villians not against them. Ha, Discord, he's awesome, can I kill Diamond Tiara now?:ajbemused:

2144672 Why would she not? She has three Gods and a mob of enemies for the Elements all in one place, it would be so easy for her and Luna to just stop them all right then....but then that would defeat the purpose of the story.

As for the story itself.....huh, only Twilight or Pinkie would be foalish enough to bother an entire mob of villians, pretty funny though I'm suprised Garble and his group did not go out side to kick the shit out of Spike:facehoof:

Disamond Dogs are pretty cool, though I HATE Rarity, but it's a kids show so of course they would not let Nightmare win the first battle like she was supposed to, I mean.....a Goddess against six mortal poines, are you kidding me? Nightmare could have wiped them out with no problem....but then that would have defeated the purpose of my episodes:facehoof: I need a smoke. Though I was happy how the Diamond Dogs treated Rarity, laughed my ass off, still think it's funny even now....I just may watch that episode again when I need a really good laugh.:rainbowlaugh:

I LOVE Discord, the thing about him is that not only is he the God of Chaos and Disharmony but the fact that everything he does can rival up with Pinkie Pie and he would still be able to win, I'm very suprised he did not just destory Luna and Celestia right then and there but besides the fact that it's a kids show there is also the point that if he killed the two Goddesses it would force the sun and moon to crash down and kill them all and that would not have effected the Gods so much but withut any one to have faith or worship them then they would have faded so I can see why there was no battle against the three.....still a little ticked how the Elements of Harmony keep defeating Gods left and right:twilightangry2:

Ahh....the Windigoes, ancient Gods of Winter or I suppose one could say even the Titans of the old world.....damn, now these are villians to admire, the fact that they have no heart and can slaughter everything without pause even maybe other Gods themselves.....damn, these three are so AWESOME!!!!! I love the Windigoes, though I don't think I ever read about them by theirselves.....hmm, sometimes the most darkest and oldest evil is oe that even the most powerful of beings can not stop, how funny:pinkiehappy:

I think you mean hoofed off not handed, but other then that.....hmm....I like Film and Flam and in all honestly yes, they did win, everyone knew that but Hasbro could not allow two villians to run off the Apple family not to metion the Element of Honesty, that would have runied the show. So as harsh as it is....they had no choice but to leave......damn, how sad:facehoof:

..............Sliver Spoon comes out of NO WHERE!!! :facehoof: And poor Iron Will, he is right though but he had told Fluttershy that she did not have to pay if she did not enjoy it.....now I make Iron will sound like a hooker:facehoof: That would make for a funny ass story. It must be so hard when you are cheated after something you really need.

They make a good point though, Spike (if Hasbro allows it) is able to cause some serious damage, I think his greed form is proof of that. Just because he is a baby dragon in the show (twelve years old in my eyes) does not mean he's not a threat, Nightmare Moon just needs to know that it was the Elements of Harmony jewlels themselves that defeated the Gods and others, not so much the ponies.....damn, I'm not one for Garble but I do feel bad for the guy on the bright side, PEEWEE was born, my favorite pet out of the eight......I wonder if Angel Bunny counts a villian or if he is just a bastard?:applejackunsure:

So is Sombra gonna actually tell a story, or just grumble and say "crystals"?:rainbowlaugh:

And maybe Chrysalis should tell her story in song.:raritystarry:

If you manage that, I will be amazed. And I will find a way to like this story again.

Damn, sometimes it sucks to be immortal, you know...I have ALWAYS wanted to see a brawl between Cadence and Chrysails, Goddess of Love Vs. Goddess of Illonus (think I spelled that wrong:facehoof:) but I have yet to read such:rainbowlaugh: This was very good, I loved the detail, you did a great job:yay:

Hey, that was pretty good! Is anything going to happen outside the meeting? I mean, Twilight, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie have all infiltrated the group, so the ponies know that most of their enemies are meeting in a secret place, for...something. Surely the newly coronated princess Twilight will grow suspicious?

Are we gonna have a chapter for Lightning Dust soon?

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Pretty soon! I'm going in order of the episodes.

Damn.....Sombra learned two things during his life as far as I'm aware.

One: Don't fight any of the Gods of Equestria, you'll lose....seriously, they are Gods for crying out loud.

Two: Go straight for the kill instead of waiting, it's easier.:pinkiehappy:

Poor Sombra:facehoof::pinkiesad2::ajbemused:

You know, Babs would have made for a cool enemy if she would have stayed as such, but it's a kids show so of course they won't let her be 100% evil and allowed her to redeem herself, oh well:facehoof: HA! I'm supirsed the bullies are still in the group, NEXT!!!! Great chapter though:ajsmug:

Who would be next? They don't have that many [true villains/i] in the show. I couldn't even count Iron Will because he provided a product and Fluttershy didn't pay for it.

Oh wait, maybe Lightning Dust is next, but she barely counts as a villain since she only did what Spitfire told her to do.

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Next season: Sunset Shimmer
She's the former student of Princess Celestia, as the text on the toy box says.

Mane 6 will grow to Mane 7, as hinted by 6 stars surrounding the central one in the scene of Twilight gaining wings.

I believe there are significant reasons behind Shimmer being the *former* student of Celestia.

All things combined, I think this may make for a set of superb episodes and she might make an awesome villain.

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I've long ago expanded this to be about most antagonists, not just the pure evil. However, now that I've reached season 3, I'm not sure where to go after I reach the end. Either I'll write slow enough that season 4 will have started, or somehow this will have to end. I'll figure that out when I get to it--but for now, hopefully you're enjoying seeing where this is going!

I do have some sort of ending planned. I'm just not sure yet when it's coming.

I am enjoying this, thanks!

And I love how apparently everyone in Equestria knows about these "secret" meetings.:rainbowlaugh:

Personally, I loved this episode, a mere mortal having to resort to a necklace that has the power of the Gods? Talk about badass if you could afford it, shit. But where the hell was Celestia or any of the other Gods? Talk about a bucking fail.....oh wait, Celestia was in a different country, still does not explain where the other four were:facehoof: Trixie is best villain, loved it

I wonder what Lightning Dust will have to say.

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