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Holy shit, guys, what's with all the downvoting?
None of you are here to read this, but c'mon. It's anthro, and I know some of you don't like that, but it's also clop, and there are probably more of you that dislike that. However, it had an emotional side to it as well, so there's that. This is turning into rambling, so I'll stop.
I thought it was good, and I barely read clop.
Well done.
This was great. Amazing for a first story. Bravo.
I thought it was ok, but you could have made it longer, like another chapter, where she tries to get rainbow back. you could have put some elements lightning dusk's personality from the show in this. it feels like she's a completely different pony here. other than that, you did a nice job for a 1st fanfic.
2347450 I see your point, but the whole point was that she would never be able to get her back. I infer that Rainbow doesn't even want to talk to her again, which sucks for Lightning. In regards to her personality, I kind of wanted her to feel different, try and give her a reason why she was the way she was, but I could've made her feel more like the show. Thanks for the comment!
2347381 Thank you!
2346600 Eh, if people want to downvote, then whatever, it's mostly the comments that have my attention. I write anthro because it's easier and more comfortable for me. Thanks for the comment!
Not typically a clop fan but this was a good story and I really think you should make a sequel where Dust and Dash get together. I like how you manipulated Dust's personality to make her slightly different than in the show and then gave an actually legit reason as to why. 8 out of 10 and I definitely would enjoy you adding on to this
why are there downvotes?????????
dafuq??? it was great!
2349421 Most likely because it was anthro and people have a grudge against it. Oh well.
it was a get story but... a bit sad for a first story maybe another chapter would be better but still a good story
2350052 I added a "Sad" tag, which I should've done earlier. As for a second chapter, I probably won't write one because it would ruin the point the point of the story. Lightning's basically realizing how terrible she acted and wishes she could forget it, even though she never will.
2350378 aww I was hoping oh well is really like to see more of this ship as there has been a surprising lack (this being the first I've seen at least) but I'd like it of you could maybe do a separate fic with this pairing I really like how you portrayed Lightning Dust in this and would really like to see it in an ongoing romantic type fic
2351237 I'm working on a new story, but it'll be Soarin & Dash instead of Lightning & Dash. She may make an appearance, but I'm not quite sure as I'm still working it around in my brain. Maybe I'll write some more of this pairing in the future!
2353027 I would really like that XD kinda becoming a RainbowDust fan (that's my official couple name and I'm sticking To it) like I already said I love Dust's personality and would love to see you work with it romantically in the future. As for your next story not reay a SoarinDash fan but ill give it a look when it comes out best of luck to you
Poor lightning
Feels.
2395909 That's all there really is to say the the matter.
2395911 This comment.
2396798 What about it?
2349998 OH, BUCK THEM! ANTHRO IS ACTUALLY
P.S. Don't actually buck them.
2396872 It's really great. I'm glad you got that kind of reaction from it.
2396995 It's great because of my reaction, or because of the Homestuck reference?
2397009 Reaction, because I don't know what Homestuck is.
2397015 It is
Holy anal cakes I use that a lot.
Ok now I'm sad and on how the hell did you do that it doesn't MAKE ANY CENCE
2417184 The power of fiction?
How the heck is this so low-rated? This deserves more than that
2734058 I am in concurrence, my brother.
2743173 My guess is because it's anthro.
2743302 Could be that some consider Lightning Dust to be out of character. Personally, I don't see how that's really the case, but even so, some might.
Probably the anthro, though.
2743363 That could be it. I think the story speaks for itself on that matter though.
Why not make this into a multiple chapter story rather than a one shot. I could see it as a good story that way. Who else agrees?
-The Good Doctor
3053581 i do!
3053581 I third the motion!
3053581>>3418856>>3418982
I'm glad that you all want a sequel to this, but I don't plan on writing one. This story was just about Lightning Dust realizing what she had done and just fantasizing what could have been. As the writer, I don't see how I could have Lightning get together with Dash somehow. Above all, I think it would kill the tone of this story too. Again, I'm glad that you want a sequel but, sadly, I can only offer you some disappointment.
3419009 you could give me a hug...
please?
3419009 what about someone else making a sequel? (with your permission, of course.)
3419055 ponies.brm.sk/group-hug.png
3419064 By all means! If someone wants to write a sequel, they can go ahead and write it! However, I really wouldn't consider it a part of this story since I didn't write it, but it can be, like, a spin off or something.
3419162
*isnt in the group hug*
... Oh... K
3419290 Everyone gets group hugs. Everyone.
3419325 *facehoof* ohh! You aren't doing it right!
You have to do it properly, or people might get confused!
Ex: <*I smile and wrap my arms around you for a quick hug* everyone gets a hug! *I remind you with a slight grin*>
Or you could just do
<*hugs* there you go!>