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A nice, fluffy erotica. How nice. And it is a bit unusual with it being a Spike x Trixie. I commend you for being unique. We don't necessarily see much of that particular ship, and I would love to see more of it, whether it be erotica or other types of fiction.
There is a couple of things that is struck me as odd:
Normally, this isn't bad, and it never was. I just think that the emboldened piece mentioned wasn't really needed. You kinda reiterated that Twilight wasn't there in the previous statement.
Then there is this:
When I read this, I initially thought that Twilight had returned, but then seeing that Spike's marefriend is Trixie--that threw me for a bit of a loop. Loved it, though personally, I would have made it a bit of a surprise of Trixie's presence. But then again, I'm just a commenter.
Other than that, once again, well done.
Gods, this is just what I needed, a pairing that you do not see much of, very, very well done job.Disappointed that they did not do foreplay first but Trixie is not one to wait, you did a very good job. Huh, Thunderlane and Twilight? You have my attention
This was great
Read this out loud to a brony friend of mine that is a Trixie clopper, i was laughing the whole time, he just about vomited all over his bedroom floor while crying deeply. I give give this 4 Spike Moustaches out of 5 due to the sheer delight i had reading this to my Trixie clopping friend
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ussCHoQttyQ
Equal likes and dislikes. The power to disrupt the order is my hands.
Finally some Spike x Trixie. This just might be the rarest ship in the fandom besides Spike x Moondancer, (mentioned in the s1 pilot but otherwise forgotten).
I thought this was a SpiLight...... BUT!
Still great thought
Spike and Trixie having sex. I wish I could add it to favorites on principal, but there are just too darn many problems with the story and prose. I can at least give it an upvote on principal.
2307365 What kind of problems with the story and prose? I can't get better unless you tell me what's wrong.
2305205 I wanted to keep up the suspense a little more, but I have a problem describing what a character is doing unless I'm using their name.
2305442 Not a fan of SpikeXTrixie, is he? Or is he not a fan of lovey-dovey sex?
2305989 2305350 Spike and Trixie is just such a rare pairing. I don't even have a proper conjoined name for it. SpiTrix? TrixSpike?
Thanks for reading, everyone. Even if you didn't comment.
Forever Apone
2307720
Not really sure, i told him about the story and he started yelling at me "NO NO NO!!!" Especially when i started reading it... My only question to him is... Why didn't he just hang up the Skype call lol.
2307720 No idea
I'm just here for the ride and badass pairing
That would be called Trixpike, I guess.
Thanks for this one, it's quite enjoyable.
2644907 or Spixie
i would never have thought of this pairing in all my life. but man did it work
Some Trike in my life. Good read. :)
This comment is super late. But I just felt I should say that while I enjoyed the read of a rare pair, Trixie was WAY out of character. She wasn't even speaking in the third person
I don't want to be seen as the "mean" comment but try and work on that a bit in the future.
it would be vary funny if spike was wrong about that, and had the typical response(bomb drop).