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Pinkie loves Rainbow, and Rainbow loves Pinkie. That's how it runs, that's how everypony is happy. Who would've guessed that one night could be enough to turn it all around, or could it?

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See, I can write nonfluff too!
Though, looking at it, it seems that I either write eye-carving drama (which people never get because, le gasp, I dare to not spell everything out) or fluff. Like with how many people perceive sexuality, you either go full in one direction or out in the other, no middle ground. Except for those who deny specialisation, like me, so I guess what I'm saying is I'm gay... :rainbowderp:
Okay, that analogy kind of broke apart three sentences before it begun. Yay asexuality! And yay for writing fluff with the same ways of giving too few a crap to reach significance as death and drama.

I digress. One night, I believe it was yesterday, though with painkillers I cannot be certain, I was struck with an idea as ingenious as few I'd previously encountered. So I made this. And decided to upload it in parts, because that's how the Evil League of Evil does it too. Except that I actually update instead of keeping away content which is finished.
God I hate that person. Anyway.

So there'll probably be updates soon and you should definitely all upvote and favorite and everything to boost this into feature because that's the only way that I can get a stiff on- I mean motivate myself to deliver the content which I promised to my readers- I mean feed my gigantic pretentious ego.

Okay, commenting on the fic isn't going as well as I'd hoped. I spent too much time with Midnight, over at my novel which you should much rather read, , I'm getting cynical again. Not that that was in any way bad, of course.

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zel #2 · Mar 23rd, 2013 · · 1 · Deceit ·

You have chosen the ship I hate the most on purpose, correct?

2304655 As mentioned before, it'd be TwiDash, if only to utilise the 10 groups concerning that, but imagine the fic with that ship. Preetty much impossible.

2304796 Well, it is a world without Photoshop afterall. So whatever those pictures show is likely taken in reality. Also, don't you think Rainbow would remember something like that?

Besides, breaking her heart and then trying to get her for herself sounds like a fairly foolish plan, don't you think?

And this, children, is a wonderful example of the RNG. Submit good stuff, get a digital camera's exposure time. Submit shit, earn feature because no one bumps it off.

everyone knows pinkie belongs with twilight.:rainbowlaugh: if this isnt your normal ship then what do you ship?

2307445 This.
Really, if TwiNight doesn't count, I guess I don't have as much as a standard ship. I wrote a tad of TwiDash lately, for variable reasons. One, I guess it's a decent ship and stuff, better than RariPie or, in fact, anything involving white or pink. Two, did you see the TwiDash fandom on here? Seriously.

Since I don't write stories, but rather use my characters' minds to develop ideas, I can deliver what is asked, and that is always more TwiDash.
And let me tell you, this fic's idea is gracious. Broken trust, depleted hope, lack of options, willful deceit...
Granted, I am not certain if and how I'll apply this in SatN (as every short story by me is merely an attempt to understand its idea so that I may do it right in SatN) and if I am, I do not wish to let it on here.

O_O Did Rainbow Dash just commit suicide!:pinkiegasp:

There, have your ending! Can I go to sleep now?
I really should lose the habit of slavering into the night when I have something to finish. It can't be healthy for me.

This one was fun. The thoughts developed by its characters were a wonderful harvest, perhaps they shall be seen again.
And remember kids, copypasting text is only lazy if you aren't yet pretentious enough to call it style.

I wished I could say more about this, but I really can't. As mentioned, it was an interesting topic to discuss, and I suppose I can use practicing the use of repeating motive. Because that's how the word is properly - anyhow.

Hm. I really wanted to see more, but oh well!

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