-Comin' back on the rebound!- I'm the guy who specialises in Spike stories.
Spike and Twilight have been invited by Princess Celestia for an upcoming garden party at her castle in Canterlot. However, Spike does not have anything to wear to the party. Spike finds an book on DIY suit making and decides to make a suit, but will he succeed?
Some Rarity and Spike shipping may be included.
Edit: Changed Cover Art to something more relevant.
(This is my first story, so it may not be all that good. Any comments or criticism are greatly appreciated.)
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It's over NINE THOUSAND!!!
177328 I love being story number 9001. It leaves so much to imagination. And thanks, man.
Awesome bro, just fucking AWESOME.
encrypted-tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRPP50TWwiryWz67XNl3G38WAI9oLvViD8xTK3NDvJVf8cYpSg- spike will cut you if you don't make another chapter
303106 This is expected to be a one-off story. But if I come up with a good idea, I may make another chapter.
um... um... can I speak please? Thank you... um...
THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING DOOOD YOU ROCK WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
Um... please keep on writing... eep
356557 Heh, no problem. Expect another story sometime next week.
"Just as Spike finished his sentence, 3 knocks came from the door." - One does not simply use number numbers in a story!
"Spike, me and Rarity going over to Carousel Boutique" -
"and some tools like Scissors and some thread." - Random capital letter!
"Want to go over to Sugarcube Corner a milkshake or two?" -
"and with 2 days left until the party" -
363332 I know, I know. I'll make the changes soon enough.
PS. If you thought that was bad, you'll hate my other stories.
solid story and very cute however some helpful criticism
1st at the start of the story you had a lot of short setances that could of been combined to flow a lot better and fell less repetive however that didn't occur through out the whole story
2nd the kiss and shipping was great but you kinda just left it feeling unfinished after Spike's rather..... impressive confession theirs another 6 paragraphs where the interaction between Spike and Rarity doesn't really seem to change and, in my personal opion and experience,charcters and people act diffrent after a fairly large realisation such as that especialy when it involves 2 or more charcters directly
369772 Thanks for the criticism, I know there may be a few unnecessary issues with it, but I just write what I think works. I know that sometimes, the characters seem out of place, but this was my first story, so I really just wrote it down for fun, I never expected it to get this sort of reaction. Also, I'm not a great writer, I just thought this would work. It may not be great, and looking back at it, I can see why.
370233 It may not be great but i'd say its pretty damn good and that you show a lot of promise. Again its a very solid piece but like anything can always use some improvment nothing to be overly critical of i assure you
Charcter interacton and how it changes is importent and something to always consider when looking over your work. At the end of the day its really more that your happy with it then anything else
wow for ur first fic this is like some of the better fics i read, really nice job
o and please make a sequel where they're at the party
Wow, this is an amazing story and great as a one-shot. Feels very episode-like. Fav'd.
364304 I just noticed that I forgot to watch you
story# = OVER 9000!!!!!!! *crushes scouter*
Great story! It was really well written. The only thing I would have liked to see was more Sparity in the story. Other than that great job!
1160803 Nope, the first 7 stories do not exist, nor dose #1337. You need to go ahead 8 stories in order to crush your scouter
177328
Fuck you! I was going to do that! 
ITS OVER 9000!!!!
4901567 beat me to it.
I love it. It feels like i was watching an episode of the show.