-Comin' back on the rebound!- I'm the guy who specialises in Spike stories.
Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash are out on another pranking spree, and Spike is their latest victim. Spike decides to plan his revenge, by pranking them back. How? With a satchet of ketchup and some sticky tape.
Any comments and criticism are appreciated, as always.
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First!
Now to read the story...
*Makes an "O" shape with fingers*
This is okay.
Short and sweet.
Well-written, too.
Good job, I thoroughly enjoyed this!
I lol'd
Nicely Done my friend
I will give you one of my internets
This was just too funny
Good old Spike, always up for a good joke.
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The spacing is a little weird, but not the worst I've seen, and it's a cute, funny little story.
c:
That's not funny.
That is a tragic mess that could end up hurting a lot of ponies.
Still a great story.
Short, but still the perfect length for what you're doing with it. Great story, loved it!
<pinkie mode>First Spikey was all
, but then he got all 
and he played the prank on us and I was all 
and then 
and Rainbow was all 
and then Twilight came and was all 
and then 
, but then they told us and we were ALL 
and now Spikey's pranking with us and it's all awesome! But I think Twilight might be a little 
</pinkie>
Thoroughly enjoyable. :3
Heh, good. It's short and full of laughter, but I think that "walking off into the distance" bit at the end doesn't quite fit.
Now scootaloo, nobody ever suspects scootaloo
My eyes and brain thoroughly enjoyed this. Well now I'm going off to read the next fanfic with this on my face:
"Spike literally jumped out of his skin..."
What does that mean?
I want to see this on the featured list!
After all the errors are worked out of it of course.
Apart from Rainbow Dash saying "however Pinkie’s reaction"... (should be "but" instead, because "however" is too verbose), I don't have much to say.
Damn, I never expected this story to get a lot of love. I will fix a few errors, but thank you for all the comments in a short space of time.
heheh funny.
Okay, the way Spike got them back was HILARIOUS!!!
Funny.
Way Too Funny.
Awesome Story
466686My best guess is that he molted like so many lizards.
That doesn't fit at all I'm thinking of the wrong lizards.
628752 It was a figure of speech, it wasn't meant to be taken literally. Apparently, you and mrpretzel did.
630432 Lighten up I was just over analyzing for the H*** of it try it sometime it's fun. First imagine what I said actually happening, then possibly laugh your a** off.
630476 Sorry, I just wanted to put that out there. Glad you enjoyed it regardless, and now I feel like a herp-a-derp.
630504s'okay
you get
for that story
Spike and Twilight's prank was just missing one thing: a punchline. Instead, they just randomly start laughing. I was thinking Twilight would say, "Stay here, I know how to stop the bleeding!" before running off and returning with a basket of hayfries, then shocking Pinkie and Dash by wiping up the ketchup on Spike's head and eating them. As it stands, this fanfic was nothing hugely remarkable, but it was definitely entertaining.
813202 Damn, I knew I forgot something! Well, shit happens.
I'm going to have to go with ... lol.
Spike had the catchup on the noodle, "Oh I'm so dizzy "
"Think I'm going to be sick" 'BARF' a packet of vomit (stew) poured out into the grass the source hidden from the pranksters & Twilight showed up with a spoon chowed down on the mess .
Not bad. I was trying my best not to laugh for kicks. Needless to say, I didn't survive 3 minutes.