Spike has decided to ask Rarity to go out with him, but he doesn’t know how to behave on a date. The solution? Read Elementary Courting for Men, a book that will teach everything about proper date behavior.
But that doesn’t mean that everything he learned will work according to his plan…
My first MLP fic, hope you all like.
Fic wrote Based on Rowan Atkinson’s (Mr. Bean) play: Elementary Dating.
If you have already watched the play you’ll know what’s going to happen, but, of course, it will have a different development and ending if you have never watched it. I recommend that you do not watch it so the plot stays “a mystery”.
Chapters (2)
Nice start, do continue.
Your native tongue isn't English or American I'm assuming. Don't get em wrong it wasn't bad, and it is readable with some leniency. However, you miss a lot of syntax that's going to make the average reader go
I sugest finding a proofreader, as I believe that will solve the problem nicely.
Please get this done in one shot.
You have a good idea here, but you need help in the grammar department. Get yourself a proofreader to help fix the mistakes in this chapter and future chapters. Then you'll have a really good story.
Trackin!
In b4 featured.
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Sim, ingles não é minha lingua oficial...
*yes, english is not my native tongue*
Thanks for the feedback! I'll be looking for someone to proofread.
Next chapters will have better syntax, I'll try give my best!
Is the next chapter almost done?
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yeah, shouldn't take long to finish it.
1800097 When will it be done?
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Within two days. Maybe.
Now that I'm on vacation from college, I'll have plenty of time to write.
That book is amusing. Go, Spike!
You do have a few errors though, so you may wish to have someone look through it and point them out. I would usually do so myself, but time is not quite on my side.
Wow. Really knocked it outta the park there Spike.
Way to go big guy!!!!
Way to go Spike!
The undies bit made me laugh big time! Also I'm a bit perturbed. The presence of books out there that could let guys properly manipulate us girls? NEVER!!!
Everything's good so far, which means a shitstorm is just around the corner.
Then, Spike saw finally that ponies no swear panties. Your alive with Twilight never more will be same.
Moar?
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Again, ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Yup...
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have a cookie!
Lovely looking story with only two chapters with the last update being over two years ago? Dammit. Well. Ugh. Another that I must cast into read later for a want to not be left I unsatisfied by an unfinished story.