Hello fellow MLP fans the name's MAD, fellow author and brony, and I'm a great fan of Spike stories, specially SpiLights....
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It's Brony man, and I would suggest asking Editors Group for help with, well....editing. Damn, I was hoping for a new Spilight, I read every single one on this site and Fanfic.....no joke That's honestly very sad but I am a very big fan of the pairing so....yeah. Anyway, be sure to request an editor if one will aid you, I'm hoping to really see more of this, I loved it, and now it's time for a smoke
2248606 I hope I will finding one (who replies are harder than I thought..)
2248606 Do you think you could point me out to some good spilights?
2249697 Guess I really am the one to go to for Spilight stories huh? Yeah, I got your back, give me a second and I'll send you a list
2248661 I can agree with that, but just keep asking, I'm sure one will aid you soon
As said before I read this before but this chapter is harder to understand, he goes from trying to escape to falling in love with her in the blink of an eye? I honestly doubt that could happen, and I did not even notice they were making love until he put his dick in her vagina, hmmmm.....I like it but bro, you need some help with the editing
Damn, besides the errors and verbal confusion, this was just bucked up, so Twi palns to kill herself? How dark, very well thought of though, shit.....shall read on
I liked where you were going, but this was a mess, sorry.
This is so full of errors that I might as well be reading it to see how not to write. But the story is fun. Is Trixie going to have her way Spike?
Romance tag--Spilight, OK
Dark tag--sold into slavery, possible rape (instead turned into passionate love-making), vengence by Trixie, OK
Tragedy tag-- I guess that's for the attempted suicide (the cut wrists, right?)
All the tags here are used correctly, from what I'm seeing. glad to see that Twilight's gonna be able to recover, please make it so that she can tell AJ and Rainbow that she and Spike are a couple. I also hope that somehow, Spike gets to escape from Trixie and is able to get back to Twilight to truly see how he feels about her.
Good lord, you have to let me edit this for you. I will not allow my favored ship to go down like this.
It has the potential, but lacks the deliverance!
Who is it
I read this on fanfic a while ago.
Dude, you REALLY need someone to help you with grammar.
Otherwise you did a good job so keep up the good work.
2252050 Sorry but that's the best I can do......
2250130 the next on will be a bit comedic I shall put in....
2254953 You seems so................
Did I review this? I think I did...huh. I would suggest an editor, this was a bit hard to understand but very well though of, loved it. Shit Manicores are beast I had thought Death would have came but a demon form of Spike is even better, I loved it, shit you are doing so well on this, can't wait for more
um please someone edit this... my brain read this in a dutch accent for fucksake. I aint even dutch.
this was awful and made my brain hurt. it's called grammar... learn to it
2305604 Believe me man that's the best I got English isn't our local language if yo must now....
My proof reader says his computer kinda bit out of wack for now..... unfortunately
2303317 Thanks for the reviews again pal your the best!
2303317 And another thing DEATH is your thing mine's the sin side of a person........
2306401 My pleasure And sin could work for anyone Very nice choice
bacon. that is all
How about no.
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finally got round to reading this! and i'm glad as fuck that i did
dragons can eat through diamonds metal cuffs should be easy, also why not flame message Celestia?
2694888 Now that you said it..........................................
sorry I don't usually get all Grammar Nazi on people because I know that sometimes the people who write these are not using their first language, however I must say a story about Twilight of all Ponies that is not grammatically correct is an affront to Twilight.
2710867 Me and my buddy ShadowofAdemon88 will deal with that chapter soon, sorry for the inconvenience and grammar......
2250083 think you could forward that list to me, too? It's kinda my favourite ship, and I'm having a real hard time finding many of them.
Woah, changeling Trixie is a new idea, I Love it!
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That.... explains everything.
wow! what a twist
2784369>>2785226>>2785886 Well....... it could be because Trixie is always alone either so she might have a deep reason why and yes her boastful attitude!
And thank you for the comment!
You....you.....used his title I gave to you.... THANK YOU SO MUCH! And the title is being accepted by more people then when I first thought of it, it really fits him eh? I even made an origin based on the title if you ever want to read it.
Now on the fic, poor Spike, he does all he can and he is still treated like a child, much as I love Trixie and think she is best villain/anti-hero this is just cruel, even for her, luckily she trying to redeem herself, but I can't se it for her I wonder what of Twilight though, wow, so that's what happens when you fight a manticore eh? remind me never to piss one off Very great chapter, really catches one attention. And though during into a Changeling is REALLy overused, for this fic....it's not so bad an idea after all.
Chrissy?
2805016 Well not her.....but.................
2808597 It could be her
2808609 Well you see that's Trixie I made her (in my story) a changeling it's something I made up just to back up or give somehow a reason why she is always alone and her boastful attitude.....
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2852889 I have yet to edit that chapter.........
Please, continue.
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Celestia is Spike's foster mom eh ? I like that..
Wonder how she will react when Twilight almost raped her foster son..
Did Trixie bite Spike's arm ? I thought they eat love..
2933563 Well that explains her depression very well......
And fir the changing biting thing.......... It just cross my mind after watching Twilight films...
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I've gotta admit, this fic is my guilty pleasure..
I don't read mature/adult fics unless the story interest me..
2949895 Happy to know that!
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I hope this wont offend you but if you are about to make a genderswap Twispike, the Dusk Shine X Barbara fic , I hope its not the one with the Flash Sentry fic you have in plan cuz I like to see that in a non genderswap...
Put simply I hope the genderswap TwiSpike fic is a diff story not the Flash Sentry X Twilight one..
2950554 I haven't thought of that....
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Thought of what ? And I'm sorry my comment offend you..
2972737 It didn't....
It just I never thought of thinking a gender bend story yet.......
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So the Flash X Twilight fic non genderbend ? That's good.
Please don't stress yourself thinking of that...just do what you're currently do..